A Little Help, Lord
A short prayer41 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's speak volumes to me! I found these words engaging,
descriptive and creative. After reading the author's words I pondered on our beautiful country and how much we need God's help. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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The author's speak volumes to me! I found these words engaging,
descriptive and creative. After reading the author's words I pondered on our beautiful country and how much we need God's help. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thanks for the review, Maria. God has got to be wondering if his noble experiment was a good idea.
Comment from nomi338
The God of this world, Satan the Devil is very powerful. He has had plenty of time to study us as a species, and he knows that what worked on Adam and Eve works on people of today. Greed. "Give me my apple now, and I while you are at it, give my brother's apple too. I'm not hungry, but I am a collector you see." I could go on, but you already know.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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The God of this world, Satan the Devil is very powerful. He has had plenty of time to study us as a species, and he knows that what worked on Adam and Eve works on people of today. Greed. "Give me my apple now, and I while you are at it, give my brother's apple too. I'm not hungry, but I am a collector you see." I could go on, but you already know.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thanks, Nolan. I didn't mention Satan, but he is hard at work.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
You did a wonderful job here with great rhyme. This is a beautifully written poem. Also, you did not make it so political to turn off one side or the other. You pointed out equal-opportunity offenders.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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You did a wonderful job here with great rhyme. This is a beautifully written poem. Also, you did not make it so political to turn off one side or the other. You pointed out equal-opportunity offenders.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thanks, Mary. I did try to spread the blame equally.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Nice photo to compliment your words as well. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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This is a beautifully written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Nice photo to compliment your words as well. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thanks, Joanne. I wonder if He heard me.
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He always hears I believe. Your welcome.
Comment from Wendy G
Ah, excellent. Yes, the sooner He returns the better! Your poems always have excellent rhyme and metre. I was just admiring that it came out as a poem. I tried to enter a poem but it rearranged my lines so I converted it to "poetic prose"! Lol. Well done, and best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Ah, excellent. Yes, the sooner He returns the better! Your poems always have excellent rhyme and metre. I was just admiring that it came out as a poem. I tried to enter a poem but it rearranged my lines so I converted it to "poetic prose"! Lol. Well done, and best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thanks, Wendy. I just reviewed your entry. Well done.
Comment from Aussie
America is in a mess, politically and in so many other ways. We are experiencing the same things here (on a smaller scale of course) the Father of Liars is in charge (so he thinks) God has more to concern like the wars and millions of starving. Politicians are fat-cats, God help you if Trump gets hold of the reins! K xx
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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America is in a mess, politically and in so many other ways. We are experiencing the same things here (on a smaller scale of course) the Father of Liars is in charge (so he thinks) God has more to concern like the wars and millions of starving. Politicians are fat-cats, God help you if Trump gets hold of the reins! K xx
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thanks for the review, Kay. I'll take anybody over Biden. You can't imagine the damage he has done to our country.
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He's far to old. I wish Obama was still available!
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Old mumble bum, maybe he needs new teeth?
Comment from jacquelyn popp
Your poem is nicely written. I loved reading your poem. I love the sentiment, meter, and your rhymes. Your poem flows well. You give a clear message to the reader. Thank you for sharing .
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Your poem is nicely written. I loved reading your poem. I love the sentiment, meter, and your rhymes. Your poem flows well. You give a clear message to the reader. Thank you for sharing .
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thanks, Jacquelyn. We can't seem to vote the crooked ones out of office.
Comment from Kaiku
couldn`t agree with you more. The trickle down effect is wrecking havoc on common sense and no one wants to admit it. They all want to assimilate to this wicked ideology that they are owed something just because they draw a breath. It is getting dangerously close to some big civil unrest and then the fingers will get very long and pointy.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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couldn`t agree with you more. The trickle down effect is wrecking havoc on common sense and no one wants to admit it. They all want to assimilate to this wicked ideology that they are owed something just because they draw a breath. It is getting dangerously close to some big civil unrest and then the fingers will get very long and pointy.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thanks for the review, Kevin. You are right about the danger of civil unrest.
Comment from karenina
Nicely written...we really do need Divine intervention sooner rather than later...
Seems the only "sides" politicians care about are the "insides" of their own pockets!
Karenina
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Nicely written...we really do need Divine intervention sooner rather than later...
Seems the only "sides" politicians care about are the "insides" of their own pockets!
Karenina
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thanks, Karenina. Your "insides" comment is priceless.
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LOL...Priceless would never turn a politician's head!
Comment from jenintorre
Wow!! Love it. Paul you are such an excellent poet. I just love reading your work. This one is exceptional and surely must win the contest. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Wow!! Love it. Paul you are such an excellent poet. I just love reading your work. This one is exceptional and surely must win the contest. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Thanks, Jen. Sometimes the things that are going on around us cry out for a message like this.
