Baseball Socks and Cleats
Getting ready for the game32 total reviews
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A short story to which many parents can relate. It is problematic in our children, and disturbing in ourselves. The short, direct sentences add to the feeling of mild distress. The presentation is good.
Thanks for a good read. Good luck.
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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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A short story to which many parents can relate. It is problematic in our children, and disturbing in ourselves. The short, direct sentences add to the feeling of mild distress. The presentation is good.
Thanks for a good read. Good luck.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thank you for reading and commenting.
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You are welcome.
Comment from lancellot
This fifty words but I don't think I would call this a complete story. It has characters, and what seems to be a typical or stereotypical family occurrence, but that's it. No conclusion or resolution. And no real purpose, Just a small snapshot.
It feels incomplete.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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This fifty words but I don't think I would call this a complete story. It has characters, and what seems to be a typical or stereotypical family occurrence, but that's it. No conclusion or resolution. And no real purpose, Just a small snapshot.
It feels incomplete.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thank you for reading. I disagree but that?s why we write, right?