Comment from royowen

Excellent

I can remember my own baptism some forty years ago, and then my own children, who made their decision, and now I see my grandchildren of their own free will giving their lives to the Lord. I see that purity in your poem, these wonderful children, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023

Thank you, Roy. Isn't it such
a blessing when our children
and grandchildren love and
serve the Lord. I very much
appreciate you stopping by
and reading and reviewing
some of my work. Many
blessings to you and your
family.

reply by royowen on 04-Jan-2023

Absolutely

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

There is nothing as precious as a child and the innocents displayed. Those who are blessed to remember their first experience with faith in their belief are exceptional. Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 04-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023

Thank you, Ben. I loved writing it. I hope your
New Year is off to a superb
start. Many blessings to you.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This religiously written free verse poem was well written, rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned most Perfectly.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024


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 Comment Written 04-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023

Thank you Dr. Ricky. I greatly
appreciate you taking the
time to read and review
some of my work. I hope
you're doing well in this
New Year. Many blessings to
you.