My Daddy
Daddy59 total reviews
Comment from Aussie
The Lord was giving you the words, you cried because of His nearness and loving thoughts. I enjoyed your poem/story about your faith in the Father, your love of the Lamb who will always come home. Blessings, Kay.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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The Lord was giving you the words, you cried because of His nearness and loving thoughts. I enjoyed your poem/story about your faith in the Father, your love of the Lamb who will always come home. Blessings, Kay.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for the review! And for the six stars! Yes, I was crying at the end of my daddy?s life and Thankful for the time God gave me and the grace to put it together to establish a strong bond with him before he died. Thank you so much.
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He watches and waits for his special girl. K xx
Comment from Karyn2
How beautifully expressed and sincere. The complexities of relationships, the longing for love and acceptance, fear of failing or not being good enough are all common human feelings that are expressed in this deeply personal poem of a daughter wanting her Daddy's love. I'm so glad you found your path to the Father's unconditional love and mercy and it sounds as though you found some reconciliation in your relationship with your earthly dad too. So heartfelt.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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How beautifully expressed and sincere. The complexities of relationships, the longing for love and acceptance, fear of failing or not being good enough are all common human feelings that are expressed in this deeply personal poem of a daughter wanting her Daddy's love. I'm so glad you found your path to the Father's unconditional love and mercy and it sounds as though you found some reconciliation in your relationship with your earthly dad too. So heartfelt.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Both. Yes. Thank you so much for the review!
Comment from Kayte Ray
well written
a great complete picture of the crux of the piece I would play with things like font in the future to help present the emotion of your piece. The stanzas work well together. Nice job
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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well written
a great complete picture of the crux of the piece I would play with things like font in the future to help present the emotion of your piece. The stanzas work well together. Nice job
Comment Written 25-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from Mariana Convery
What a beautiful poem. Not only is the topic and underlying theme powerful and touching, but the meter and rhythm was masterfully done. Thank you for sharing. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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What a beautiful poem. Not only is the topic and underlying theme powerful and touching, but the meter and rhythm was masterfully done. Thank you for sharing. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much and I?m so glad you liked it!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
powerful and moving poem about finding peace at last and learning to accept one's parents as they are =warts and all realizing that you are your father and mother's daughter
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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powerful and moving poem about finding peace at last and learning to accept one's parents as they are =warts and all realizing that you are your father and mother's daughter
Comment Written 25-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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Yes and yes. Thank you so much!
Comment from jmdg1954
This nearly made me teary eyed as well. As a father to three adult children I have a troubled past. I'm thankful they are all in my life, but I lament on what could've been if I made better choices in my past.
Happy holidays, my friend. Enjoy bring daddy's little girl. I'm sure he is.
John
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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This nearly made me teary eyed as well. As a father to three adult children I have a troubled past. I'm thankful they are all in my life, but I lament on what could've been if I made better choices in my past.
Happy holidays, my friend. Enjoy bring daddy's little girl. I'm sure he is.
John
Comment Written 25-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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Sadly, my daddy passed over to be with Jesus on Thanksgiving Day. That?s part of what prompted the poem. I am so blessed to have come to this understanding before he died. Thank you so much for the review!
Comment from Sugarray77
Thank you for sharing this very moving poem. I could feel the tenderness and emotional rawness as you wove your story within this poem. Well done on all points and thanks so much for sharing. Merry Christmas.
Melissa
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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Thank you for sharing this very moving poem. I could feel the tenderness and emotional rawness as you wove your story within this poem. Well done on all points and thanks so much for sharing. Merry Christmas.
Melissa
Comment Written 25-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much! Merry Christmas to you too!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
This is a beautiful portrait and reflection on your relationship wi your Dad and your growth towards maturity and understanding. Stanza 3 and 4 are a little confusing - maybe you could clarify a bit. I enjoyed reading this. Its strength is in its authentic voice.
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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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This is a beautiful portrait and reflection on your relationship wi your Dad and your growth towards maturity and understanding. Stanza 3 and 4 are a little confusing - maybe you could clarify a bit. I enjoyed reading this. Its strength is in its authentic voice.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much!
Comment from lancellot
This is a wonderful piece. No one could blame your tears. Perfectly understandable. Growing up is hard and many times we just don't understand things or what we have until we're older.
{i }remained separate, haunted.
- I remained separate, haunted.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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This is a wonderful piece. No one could blame your tears. Perfectly understandable. Growing up is hard and many times we just don't understand things or what we have until we're older.
{i }remained separate, haunted.
- I remained separate, haunted.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for making me aware of the error. Merry Christmas!
Comment from Terry Broxson
This is a well-written poem from the heart. It is interesting how perspectives change over time, and then time itself teaches us new lessons. Your pathos is understandable and relatable. Excellent work. Terry.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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This is a well-written poem from the heart. It is interesting how perspectives change over time, and then time itself teaches us new lessons. Your pathos is understandable and relatable. Excellent work. Terry.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much!