Comment from T B Botts

Exceptional

Well done Roy!
There is nothing that was made that wasn't made by God. He is love, and yet it is so easy to forget sometimes. All that He does, He does because of love. What a great poem. Very profound.
Have a blessed day.
Tom

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022

Thanks Tom, for these generous comments and empathetic review, blessings Roy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Beautiful praise poem to the Lord of Love, Who is Love and shows us always what love is and He commands it of us with others. Thank you for this powerful poem, Roy!!

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022

Thanks Helen, for these generous comments and empathetic review, blessings Roy

Comment from BOO ghost

Exceptional

Picked these words. but You live within every fibre, every atom of creation,
nothing can destroy You, you are the power of the universe.
Yes. I think what we call God existed before the Big Bangs. It is dark energy and dark matter. Living matter with an intelligence that triggered into Big Bangs. What science says and Mr. Steven Hawking's. Nicely done! I know, I been a ghost for years! Been in hibernation. BOO Ghost ð??».

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022

Thanks Boo, for these generous comments and empathetic review, blessings Roy

Comment from Mabaker12

Exceptional

I know where your inspiration comes like a fountain to fill your mind and how I long to sup from the same vessel,
alas I don't have the price to buy your talent, so I must stand back and admire. Blessings Anne

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022

You have tons of talent, and you are doing it with Mugs Anne. We all win with your ability. God weaves an impeccable through all of us. So bless you for your kindness and generosity, blessings roy

reply by Mabaker12 on 04-Nov-2022

We all should have one friend in life and I have you! Blessings Anne

reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022

Yes, you have indeed, somebody recommended I read your work Ann, and I?m glad I did, as the young say. ?You rock?.

reply by Mabaker12 on 11-Nov-2022

Thanks 100%

reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022

Well done

Comment from gudbjorg

Exceptional

I find it very interesting read asking these wodnderful and important questions in your poem.The message is clear and is pleasant and flowing read, not to long and not to short.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022

Thanks for these generous comments and empathetic review, blessings Roy

Comment from susand3022

Exceptional

To be able to feel that much love, Roy, what a powerful thing. I can honestly say, I envy you that. I wish I could find that kind of peace within myself. It has nothing to do with believing in God, it has to do with believing in me.
Very well done, Roy
Susan

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022

Thanks Susan, for these terrific comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Yes, we are underserving of God's love, but he loves us anyway. He loves us so much that He sent His son to die for our sins. So we can return to Heaven with Him. WOW! It can't get much better than that. Thank you for this beautifully written reminder.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022

Thanks Barbara, for these fantastic. comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Faith Williams

Excellent

I really get the sense in reading your poem not only of the truly limitless love God has for us but how it is woven into everything and everyone. Thanks so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022

Thanks Faith, for these generous comments and empathetic review, blessings Roy

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Strong descriptors that illustrate God in this poem unclude "unfathomable, boundless, compassionate, and mighty."

While humans are totally unworthy, He still loves His creation with a "depth" of love undeserved.

This makes those who believe desire Him all the more.

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 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022

Thanks Brett, for these generous comments and empathetic review, blessings Roy

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

You dwell in my innermost part, yet You cannot be bought, or enslaved.
I thought this line was magnificent. Such a concise rendering of an ultimate truism. Not a word out of place in my opinion. Blessings, Kate xx

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 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022

Thanks Kate, for these generous comments and empathetic review, blessings Roy