Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Praise God that He is our perfect Heavenly Father and He has made it possible for us to be His children through the work of Jesus our Lord. Great poem to show us that we are covered in Christ and so are not rejected.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022

Thanks Helen, for these terrific comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

I looked at the picture and then read your title: Would we reject your child? and wondered, Who is "we"?
And I don't get the part, "I know I should make father sad, and yet I know I make him glad." And then, the part about the home SHOULD be a refuge.
I'm obviously missing something, here. Would you care to explain your meaning, Roy?
And the last bit of your author's notes...
Thank you,
Katharine

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022

I think it should be obvious Katherine, what do think it means? I haven?t had one query yet, but thank you for the review, blessings Roy

reply by pome lover on 13-Oct-2022

you had mine

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

This is a very good poem but a rather shocking picture. Those kids look so sad. Could it be they do not yet know that Jesus is their friend and protector?

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022

Thanks Carol, for these terrific comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Yes, we need the Lord now more than ever! All ages! Our world is a mess and WWIII approaches. Putin has escalated his attacks on Ukraine since Monday. President Biden is meeting with with world leaders about what to do. Please pray and this will affect us all as the Lord's return is close.
Pray the gospel will go forth in mighty power! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022

Thanks Sally, for these terrific comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Powerful image and fine words. I was a bit confused by "I know I should make Father sad, and yet I know I make Him glad".
Did you mean "I know I do make Father sad/ And yet I also make Him glad" ... Not sure why you know you "should" make Father sad ...?
Otherwise, I enjoyed the rest of it.
Wendy

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 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022

I?ve changed the wording, even I didn?t know what I mean, thanks so much Wendy, blessings Roy

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your poem was well presented, Roy. The lines and rhymes
worked well. Your first line is true of man, but of God. Yes,
parents sometimes reject their child(ren). However, God would
never do so. You gave readers much to think about. Your words
flowed smoothly.
Thanks for the notes, Jan

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 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022

Thanks so much Jan, for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy