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Jack and Bumkin's Play Date

As they baby talked cheek to cheek

36 total reviews 
Comment from Sally Law
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What little pumpkin pies! They really are boo-ti-ful! A fun one for this prompt. I'm smiling big after reviewing this is one, mystery poet! ;))

Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
    And it looks like little Miss 'Sally Sweet Cheeks" has a 'Jack' O Lantern of her own. Sorry I couldn't resist! Lol....Thank you so much for this lovely review and for all the kind and fun comments for my little Halloween poem.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is funny and ideal for the time of year as Halloween is almost upon us. You made me laugh with this humorous write and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
    Dolly you are so incredibly sweet and I thank you for such kind comments about my poem and picture. You made my day and your laughter is contagious my friend. Thank you for that.
Comment from Ulla
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Hehehe, how cute is this! Not only is it a well written 5-7-5 poem, but it also well with the wonderful photo. Thanks a lot for sharing this funny entry for the contest. Good luck. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
    Ulla, you are so incredibly sweet and fun too. Thanks so very much for your very kind comments and your sweet little giggle. You made my day and now I am smiling too. You are contagious my friend.
Comment from karenina
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Oh my gosh! Your 5-7-5 is adorable...

But that photo is so precious!

I'm left just sitting here grinning ear to ear...

Or is that cheek to cheek?

:)

Karenina

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
    Oh Karenina, you are so sweet! Thank you for such a lovely review and the kind words for this poem. And I love your fun comments that gave me a smile back. Thanks my dear friend!
reply by karenina on 11-Oct-2022
    :)
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
    Did you know it was me?
reply by karenina on 11-Oct-2022
    I did not! But I suspected!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
    You just know me so well. And I am so thankful for that because it says a lot about our friendship. Please take it easy because I worry about you. We just had a 70 year old friend die of it two days ago, so please take care of my dear friend.
reply by karenina on 11-Oct-2022
    I'm so sorry about your friend. We're emerging from it--but others int he family are coming down with it...

    It's a little insane!
Comment from Dawn Munro
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Oh my heavens, what an adorable 5-7-5 poem!!!! I admit the picture you chose was what drew me in -- it is irresistible -- but your poem is so cute too! A perfect match! Good luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
    Dawn, you are so generously sweet and kind! I so appreciate your lovely review and fun comments that gave me a smile right back. Thanks so much my friend!
reply by Dawn Munro on 09-Oct-2022
    It was my pleasure!
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
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This is such a fun prompt, and I can see that ran with it.

The photo is priceless and made me laugh straight away:)

The font choice is perfect and overall color story works well.

This is a great example of a 5-7-5 verse, as the syllable count is correct.

Thank you for sharing.




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 Comment Written 09-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
    Kitty,, you are so generously sweet and kind! I so appreciate your lovely review and fun comments that gave me a smile right back. Thanks so much my friend!