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Comment from Wendy G
Very colourful image, and a fine entry. I see the colourful aspects as reflecting Sally's bright personality and her vivid and varied writing. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Very colourful image, and a fine entry. I see the colourful aspects as reflecting Sally's bright personality and her vivid and varied writing. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thank you so very much Wendy,, for such very kind words for my dedication to Sally's Circus Poems. I am truly delightful that you liked it. Thank you again my dear friend!
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
I expect I now need to review Sally Law's portfolio. I enjoyed the change in direction introduced near your ending. I fun poem that weaves in some mesmerizing visuals. Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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I expect I now need to review Sally Law's portfolio. I enjoyed the change in direction introduced near your ending. I fun poem that weaves in some mesmerizing visuals. Well done.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thank you so very much Charles, for such very kind words for my dedication to Sally's Circus Poems. I am truly delightful that you liked it. Thank you again my dear friend!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
love this poem about an owl and all that bird symbolizes and means = i like the image chosen as it sums up the poem and helps paints the picture of the sublime bird the owl is.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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love this poem about an owl and all that bird symbolizes and means = i like the image chosen as it sums up the poem and helps paints the picture of the sublime bird the owl is.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thanks Jake for such kind words for this dedication poem to Sally Law's circus poems. I am delighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you so much my dear friend.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is a great contest entry.
The theme is well thought out and realized.
The stunning artwork is impressive and a perfect choice, as the strong image compliments your writing in a beautiful way.
I appreciate the poetic format and font choice.
The rhymes flow like silk and create a timbre that reminds a ribbon dancing in the sky.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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This is a great contest entry.
The theme is well thought out and realized.
The stunning artwork is impressive and a perfect choice, as the strong image compliments your writing in a beautiful way.
I appreciate the poetic format and font choice.
The rhymes flow like silk and create a timbre that reminds a ribbon dancing in the sky.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thanks so very much Kitty for such a lovely review to my dedication to Sally's circus poem style. This was so much fun I may need to them more often. I truly appreciate all your kind comments my dear friend.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned for the This One's Faux You contest. You used beautiful imagery with the colorful owl art work you chose and very good descriptive words. I used to collect owls many years ago. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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This is a very well written poem you have penned for the This One's Faux You contest. You used beautiful imagery with the colorful owl art work you chose and very good descriptive words. I used to collect owls many years ago. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thanks so very much Teri, for such a lovely review to my dedication to Sally's circus poem style. This was so much fun I may need to try them more often. I truly appreciate all your kind comments my dear friend.
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You are so welcome!
Comment from LateBloomer
Author, this poem is absolutely fabulous and a beautiful tribute to our own Sally Law. Your poem reads and flows well and has good imager within.
I especially liked:
Everyone wanted
to see him fly
Wingspan explosion
painted sky
(D, I want to see the colorful owl fly. He is a hoot, indeed.)
Beautiful artwork. This poem made me smile. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Author, this poem is absolutely fabulous and a beautiful tribute to our own Sally Law. Your poem reads and flows well and has good imager within.
I especially liked:
Everyone wanted
to see him fly
Wingspan explosion
painted sky
(D, I want to see the colorful owl fly. He is a hoot, indeed.)
Beautiful artwork. This poem made me smile. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thanks so very much Margaret, for such a lovely review to my dedication to Sally's circus poem style. Also for your very generous six stars. That means so much to me! This was so much fun I may need to try them more often. I truly appreciate all your kind comments my dear friend.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did an awesome job, Mystery Author, with your contest entry.
The picture of the owl is beautiful. I liked the font choice, the rhymes,
and the smooth flow. The storyline was well thought out, too. While
this owl believes he was being ignored and would move on for his
benefit, I could picture Sally doing the same thing with the intention
of helping those wherever he landed. Of course, the people would
welcome him and offer some bread. That's this owl and Sally--
always thinking of others before themselves and always positive.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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You did an awesome job, Mystery Author, with your contest entry.
The picture of the owl is beautiful. I liked the font choice, the rhymes,
and the smooth flow. The storyline was well thought out, too. While
this owl believes he was being ignored and would move on for his
benefit, I could picture Sally doing the same thing with the intention
of helping those wherever he landed. Of course, the people would
welcome him and offer some bread. That's this owl and Sally--
always thinking of others before themselves and always positive.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thanks so very much Jan, for such a lovely review to my dedication to Sally's circus poem style. Also for your very generous six stars. That means so much to me! This was so much fun I may need to try them more often. I truly appreciate all your kind comments my dear friend.
Comment from prettybluebirds
You have done an excellent job with the writing prompt. I love the colorful bird you created for Sally Law, I bet she does too. The picture is spectacular and adds a lot to the writing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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You have done an excellent job with the writing prompt. I love the colorful bird you created for Sally Law, I bet she does too. The picture is spectacular and adds a lot to the writing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thank you so very much for such very kind words for my dedication to Sally's Circus Poems. I am truly delightful that you liked it. Thank you again my dear friend!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a clever way to write a poem. I like the cursive effect. The poem is very colorful within the body and also the image. I hope you do well in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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What a clever way to write a poem. I like the cursive effect. The poem is very colorful within the body and also the image. I hope you do well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thank you so very much Rosemary, for such very kind words for my dedication to Sally's Circus Poems. I am truly delightful that you liked it. Thank you again my dear friend!
Comment from Sugarray77
Ohhh, this is a good one and so very apt. I love Sally's work and your tribute to her style is wonderful... plus you chose a really nice piece of artwork that I know she will be able to see with her limited vision... the colors are so vibrant! Well done!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Ohhh, this is a good one and so very apt. I love Sally's work and your tribute to her style is wonderful... plus you chose a really nice piece of artwork that I know she will be able to see with her limited vision... the colors are so vibrant! Well done!!
Melissa
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thank you so very much Melissa, for such very kind words for my dedication to Sally's Circus Poems. I am truly delightful that you liked it. Thank you again my dear friend!