The Return
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Comment from BethShelby
This is quite a twist. I hope you've got a man in mind for Margo that looks just like Miles when she gets back from the past. lol. This lovesick lady isn't going to do well otherwise. I'm still trying to wrap my mind around Meg and Margo being able to see each other. I'm anxiously awaiting plan two.
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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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This is quite a twist. I hope you've got a man in mind for Margo that looks just like Miles when she gets back from the past. lol. This lovesick lady isn't going to do well otherwise. I'm still trying to wrap my mind around Meg and Margo being able to see each other. I'm anxiously awaiting plan two.
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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LOL, Beth!! I've got the butcher ready for Margot when she goes home. He's 90, and needs looking after!!!! LOL
Thank you so much for this lovely review, Beth, I really appreciate it. Warm hugs, my friend. Love Sandra xxx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-You did a great job with this chapter, Sandra, and I didn't want to stop reading.
-Everything gels even though it turns out there is a wrinkle, you might say "It's a wrinkle in time!"
-Excellent description of the room that we could almost smell the stench and wanted to get out of there, too.
-What a scene to have witnessed, and poor Margot is not only going through a lot of emotion, but also through time, and she has lost 'her' Miles.
-She had really fallen for him, and why not; he was everything she could want, and now he can't even see her.
-I'm sure it was heartbreaking for her when she realized that.
-It is going to take some time for her to readjust because I don't think she is going to forget that easily.
-On the other hand, Meg has already claimed that those were words she had said to Miles.
-It certainly presents another dilemma for Bessie and Margot to figure out, and to get Meg to be in on the plan. I will be very interesting to see what you come up with for the ending, my friend, but I know you won't disappoint!!!!! Well done!!
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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-You did a great job with this chapter, Sandra, and I didn't want to stop reading.
-Everything gels even though it turns out there is a wrinkle, you might say "It's a wrinkle in time!"
-Excellent description of the room that we could almost smell the stench and wanted to get out of there, too.
-What a scene to have witnessed, and poor Margot is not only going through a lot of emotion, but also through time, and she has lost 'her' Miles.
-She had really fallen for him, and why not; he was everything she could want, and now he can't even see her.
-I'm sure it was heartbreaking for her when she realized that.
-It is going to take some time for her to readjust because I don't think she is going to forget that easily.
-On the other hand, Meg has already claimed that those were words she had said to Miles.
-It certainly presents another dilemma for Bessie and Margot to figure out, and to get Meg to be in on the plan. I will be very interesting to see what you come up with for the ending, my friend, but I know you won't disappoint!!!!! Well done!!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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I'm already working on the next chapter. I didn't want to stop writing when I got to the end here. I'm so glad it's gone down well with you, and that you enjoyed it. Meg will know everything that happened between Miles and Margot, but believe it was with her. Everything else she'll not know about at all.
Let's see what Margot and Bessie come up with now!
Thank you so very much for the golden star and this really lovely review. You're my gem! Love and hugs, Sandra xx
I was so pleased to read Robert's story bringing Sean back again. I hope we are going to get more. xxxx
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I don't blame you for not wanting to stop. I didn't, either!!! Thanks for sharing. You never know with Robert, and I don't either:):)
I assume whatever you do with Bessie and Margot will include how Margot fares regarding Miles. Does she have her memory slate wiped clean, too?!
Comment from aryr
What a great continuation chapter, Sandra. That certainly was a tangled web that Margot found herself in. It was mind boggling that she and Meg had separated and that Miles saw Meg. It also broke her heart that she was in love with Miles. Now they had to find her murderer before the deed was done. Great job, well done and greatly enjoyed. Hugs n smiles!
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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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What a great continuation chapter, Sandra. That certainly was a tangled web that Margot found herself in. It was mind boggling that she and Meg had separated and that Miles saw Meg. It also broke her heart that she was in love with Miles. Now they had to find her murderer before the deed was done. Great job, well done and greatly enjoyed. Hugs n smiles!
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Alie, I had fun writing this part. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. I'm getting a bit nervous as I near the end. No one knows my address!!! LOL. Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
Comment from damommy
Well, that was a complete surprise! Meg's back. I feel so sorry for Margot. She may have been hoping she could stay with Miles forever. She shouldn't have gone through that door.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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Well, that was a complete surprise! Meg's back. I feel so sorry for Margot. She may have been hoping she could stay with Miles forever. She shouldn't have gone through that door.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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I was gobsmacked when that happened! No one told me, or I'd not have let Margot go in there. I'm afraid my characters have ideas of their own!! Lol. With two days left, they have their work cut out now. We'll see how much Margot and Bessie can tell Meg. That will be a fun chapter to write!!
Thank you so much for this lovely review, dear Yvonne, and the gold star. I'm keeping my fingers crossed you'll all like the ending. Thanks dear SATP, sending lots of love, and hugs. Sandra xxx
I'll try and get that chat this week. Love you. xxxx
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I'm hooked again. I'm sorry that I didn't read each chapter because I was busy traveling this year but I'm back now and will try to read every chapter. This mystery is getting better and more intriguing. You write beautifully.
I found a small formatting problem:
wanted so
much to comfort her but, knowing she was invisible in her visions,
Excellent.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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I'm hooked again. I'm sorry that I didn't read each chapter because I was busy traveling this year but I'm back now and will try to read every chapter. This mystery is getting better and more intriguing. You write beautifully.
I found a small formatting problem:
wanted so
much to comfort her but, knowing she was invisible in her visions,
Excellent.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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Aw, that's just so nice of you to read this chapter. I hope you've been to some nice places? Thank you so much for the golden star and lovely review, Jasmine, and for telling me about the formatting. I don't know why that happens. When I went into correct it, it was fine. So I made it go wrong, then corrected it, and it worked!! Lol. Crazy! Thanks, dear friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
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Hope you are feeling better now.
Hugs.
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Much better, thank you, Jasmine. Only waiting for my ribs to get better. 😊🥰
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Well, this isn't at all good. I have no clue how they're going to make everything right now. I feel sorry for Margot. She's so in love with Miles. Of course, we all knew it couldn't really happen, but it should. LOL
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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Well, this isn't at all good. I have no clue how they're going to make everything right now. I feel sorry for Margot. She's so in love with Miles. Of course, we all knew it couldn't really happen, but it should. LOL
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much, Barbara. Not many left to go. 2 chapters? Now we have to wait and see what happens next. Thank you for the golden star, dear friend. I really appreciate it. Warm hugs, Sandra xxx