Where can I go?
A poem41 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much Raul, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem s well-presented, Roy. I liked the image, the
color scheme, and the message. Your lines read well with
good rhymes and great imagery. The notes were informative.
Your message is string and true. Yes, God is everywhere--no
place to hide.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
Your poem s well-presented, Roy. I liked the image, the
color scheme, and the message. Your lines read well with
good rhymes and great imagery. The notes were informative.
Your message is string and true. Yes, God is everywhere--no
place to hide.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much Jan, for these splendid comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Janet Foor
A beautiful poem of faith Roy. Truly there is no where we can go, no where that one can hide for God is not present 24/7. Excellent scripture to enlighten us as well.
Blessings
Janet.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
A beautiful poem of faith Roy. Truly there is no where we can go, no where that one can hide for God is not present 24/7. Excellent scripture to enlighten us as well.
Blessings
Janet.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much Janet, for these splendid comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Teri7
Roy, This is a very well written poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive and so very true words. He is everywhere and there is no place to hide from Him. If we are His children we should not want to hide from Him. Very good job my friend. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
Roy, This is a very well written poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive and so very true words. He is everywhere and there is no place to hide from Him. If we are His children we should not want to hide from Him. Very good job my friend. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Thanks Teri, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Excellent poem. Well done.
Perfect rendering of the Psalm, incorporated Jesus' saving sacrifice.
What's the picture of?
Best wishes and God bless you richly.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
Excellent poem. Well done.
Perfect rendering of the Psalm, incorporated Jesus' saving sacrifice.
What's the picture of?
Best wishes and God bless you richly.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much Wayne, for these splendid comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from harmony13
The author conveys well the peace where God is found. The author's
words are encouraging, inviting, meaningful, descriptive and creative.
I pondered on the these words and thought about how in nature I find God. Thank you for the author's notes - the Bible quote say it all! Great Poem! Hi Roy, hope you and the family are doing well!....Maria
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
The author conveys well the peace where God is found. The author's
words are encouraging, inviting, meaningful, descriptive and creative.
I pondered on the these words and thought about how in nature I find God. Thank you for the author's notes - the Bible quote say it all! Great Poem! Hi Roy, hope you and the family are doing well!....Maria
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much Marie, for these splendid comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
My favorite time if day is the peace of the sun waking up. I so enjoy sitting on my back porch with a cup of tea listening as the birds wake up. It's so easy to know God is starting our new day. Thank you for sharing this poem with us.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
My favorite time if day is the peace of the sun waking up. I so enjoy sitting on my back porch with a cup of tea listening as the birds wake up. It's so easy to know God is starting our new day. Thank you for sharing this poem with us.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Thanks Barbara, for these lovely comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem is clearly written and well illustrated. It reminds us God is everywhere and in everything. The light of faith gives you all you need to help you through life.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
This poem is clearly written and well illustrated. It reminds us God is everywhere and in everything. The light of faith gives you all you need to help you through life.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much Joan, for these splendid comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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Don't mention it, Roy.
Joan
Comment from Sally Law
Marvelous poem, dear Roy. I've just be sitting here taking it all in and basking in God's word. Surely the end times dark was will not consume us, for indeed God is light and truth, and a strong refuge. Sending you my best today as always and blessings in Christ,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
Marvelous poem, dear Roy. I've just be sitting here taking it all in and basking in God's word. Surely the end times dark was will not consume us, for indeed God is light and truth, and a strong refuge. Sending you my best today as always and blessings in Christ,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Thanks Sally, for these super comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is another excellent poem. God is everywhere and all encompassing. Thus, there is no need to fear, not even the dark of night:
My prayer is that faith pierces night,
that darkness trembles, then takes flight.
Beautifully written. Blessings Kate xx
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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
This is another excellent poem. God is everywhere and all encompassing. Thus, there is no need to fear, not even the dark of night:
My prayer is that faith pierces night,
that darkness trembles, then takes flight.
Beautifully written. Blessings Kate xx
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much Kate, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy