The Return
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Comment from John Ciarmello
Ahh! Miles is gaining some ground! It's so satisfying to have him confront his mother and father. It does my heart good to watch him stand up to them. Wonderful! I hope I'm finding you well, my friend, Sandra.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Ahh! Miles is gaining some ground! It's so satisfying to have him confront his mother and father. It does my heart good to watch him stand up to them. Wonderful! I hope I'm finding you well, my friend, Sandra.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this wonderful review, I'm so glad you enjoyed the confrontation. I enjoyed writing it!! Lol.
I'm a lot better now, thank you, John. Just got to be careful not to bend, it still hurts my ribs when I do. Have a lovely week, dear friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from BethShelby
It seems there is no love loss anywhere within the Brandon family. They all seem to hate each other. If Miles has turned out to be decent person, he doesn't have his parents to thank for it. It sounds like Meg whole family could use someone to go back in time and make things right. At least Margot and Bessie are accomplishing bringing out the truth and hopefully preventing her murder. I enjoying the story.
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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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It seems there is no love loss anywhere within the Brandon family. They all seem to hate each other. If Miles has turned out to be decent person, he doesn't have his parents to thank for it. It sounds like Meg whole family could use someone to go back in time and make things right. At least Margot and Bessie are accomplishing bringing out the truth and hopefully preventing her murder. I enjoying the story.
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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No, this is a very dysfunctional family, no love at all to be seen. Thank you so much, Beth. Not many chapters left, and everyone will know who the villain is. I'm so pleased you are enjoying my story, thanks, my friend. Love and hugs. Sandra xx
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You demonstrate interesting interplay between your characters in this chapter, and we have the feeling that we are witnessing the irreconcilable collapse of a family. Well-executed. Kate xx
'I kept that,' he said > confusing. Define who he is
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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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You demonstrate interesting interplay between your characters in this chapter, and we have the feeling that we are witnessing the irreconcilable collapse of a family. Well-executed. Kate xx
'I kept that,' he said > confusing. Define who he is
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Kate, for this lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for the query, I've changed, he, for, the solicitor said... That should sort that part out. I'm glad you mentioned it. Have a wonderful week, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This story just gets better and better and better. I can't wait to find out all the juicy gossip about these two horrible people. But can they stop Meg's death. I can't wait to see.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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This story just gets better and better and better. I can't wait to find out all the juicy gossip about these two horrible people. But can they stop Meg's death. I can't wait to see.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much, Barbara, for your continued fabulous reviews, and for the golden sixth star! I'm glad you're still enjoying the story. We'll soon discover who the would be murderer is. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx