Birdbath
Birds gather to drink, bathe and gossip.43 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, you have decided all these birds are females and your sweet words brought the scene to life here Linda, a private bath for the ladies, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Ha ha ha, you have decided all these birds are females and your sweet words brought the scene to life here Linda, a private bath for the ladies, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
Comment from leather
You picked a lovely, watercolor-like image to go along with your poem. I believe your second line doesn't contain enough syllables. I may be wrong--if so please forgive me. Best wishes.
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You picked a lovely, watercolor-like image to go along with your poem. I believe your second line doesn't contain enough syllables. I may be wrong--if so please forgive me. Best wishes.
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork, Linda.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-Good description of the birds
that gather to drink and bathe.
-A very good satori line.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Nice artwork, Linda.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-Good description of the birds
that gather to drink and bathe.
-A very good satori line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
Comment from Wendy G
Oh that's a very nice haiku! I like the image too. Your comparison of the birds with a women's club is different and fresh. . Very well done. Sending best wishes.
Wendy
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Oh that's a very nice haiku! I like the image too. Your comparison of the birds with a women's club is different and fresh. . Very well done. Sending best wishes.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
Comment from Gert sherwood
Birds gather to drink, bathe and gossip.
Birdbath
livelylinda what a fun haiku to read, I also have a birth bath and watch the
variety birds that come to our feeder smiles
sometimes jump in to bathe
women's' club of sorts
Gert
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Birds gather to drink, bathe and gossip.
Birdbath
livelylinda what a fun haiku to read, I also have a birth bath and watch the
variety birds that come to our feeder smiles
sometimes jump in to bathe
women's' club of sorts
Gert
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
Comment from Susanjohn
Womans club of sorts!! How clever and very possibly True! I've watched those birds flitting and sipping...
It is a club! :-) Fun little write, made me smile.
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Womans club of sorts!! How clever and very possibly True! I've watched those birds flitting and sipping...
It is a club! :-) Fun little write, made me smile.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a fun haiku contest entry, Linda.
I enjoyed reading it. Great job with the
style. Your words painted a great picture
for readers though the actual picture is
great.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
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What a fun haiku contest entry, Linda.
I enjoyed reading it. Great job with the
style. Your words painted a great picture
for readers though the actual picture is
great.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
Comment from Whitewave
livelylinda,
A beautiful picture to go with the words of your clever haiku poem. Seeing the birdbath as a 'womens' club of sorts' is quite a clever metaphor, amusing and seems true.
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livelylinda,
A beautiful picture to go with the words of your clever haiku poem. Seeing the birdbath as a 'womens' club of sorts' is quite a clever metaphor, amusing and seems true.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
Comment from royowen
Heh heh, just love this Linda, these birds are incredibly like some of the networking abilities of the human equivalent. They gather in large bunches, are we like them, or are they like us? Well done, very perceptive of you Linda, well done, blessings Roy
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Heh heh, just love this Linda, these birds are incredibly like some of the networking abilities of the human equivalent. They gather in large bunches, are we like them, or are they like us? Well done, very perceptive of you Linda, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
Comment from jessizero
This was a fun piece of haiku. I like the image of birds enjoying a women's club "or sorts." This was utterly charming, and I had fun reading it. Thanks for sharing.
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This was a fun piece of haiku. I like the image of birds enjoying a women's club "or sorts." This was utterly charming, and I had fun reading it. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022