Baby in Blue
Favorite grandson's first born son due in September.67 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think we can all identify with these words as we adore our Grandchildren and we are so happy when they are born as our legacy carries on in life, much enjoyed Linda and congratulations, love Dolly x
I think we can all identify with these words as we adore our Grandchildren and we are so happy when they are born as our legacy carries on in life, much enjoyed Linda and congratulations, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Thank you for sharing this poem. I like the bright picture. I know you can't wait to get that baby into your arms. Congratulations on your accomplishments. Have a great day.
Thank you for sharing this poem. I like the bright picture. I know you can't wait to get that baby into your arms. Congratulations on your accomplishments. Have a great day.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Baby in Blue ', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a privilege to read and review this talented poet's work. This is definitely a six. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
'Baby in Blue ', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a privilege to read and review this talented poet's work. This is definitely a six. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
He's coming, don't fret that. They always make it here. Then a few years later, maybe like 13, you wonder why you waited so anxiously. Not really, we have wonderful children (5) grandchildren (10) and great grandchildren (11) I don't know if I can make it for my first great-great-grandchild but Imma tryin'. They are all so much fun, especially when either I can go home or I can send them home. LOL
He's coming, don't fret that. They always make it here. Then a few years later, maybe like 13, you wonder why you waited so anxiously. Not really, we have wonderful children (5) grandchildren (10) and great grandchildren (11) I don't know if I can make it for my first great-great-grandchild but Imma tryin'. They are all so much fun, especially when either I can go home or I can send them home. LOL
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
Comment from jake cosmos aller
congratulations. I don't have children but I do now have great-grand nieces and nephews, Captures the mood in a haiku-like manner. Well done especially the interplay between forever
awaited
anticipated.
congratulations. I don't have children but I do now have great-grand nieces and nephews, Captures the mood in a haiku-like manner. Well done especially the interplay between forever
awaited
anticipated.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
Comment from GeraldShuler
This is short and sweet and completely complete. You did a great job portraying the emotions of a great grand parent. That is hard to do successfully in a short poem, but you did it. Well done.
This is short and sweet and completely complete. You did a great job portraying the emotions of a great grand parent. That is hard to do successfully in a short poem, but you did it. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
First, congratulations on your coming addition. Your poem reflects the joy and wonder the event engenders. A beautiful summation in a few words.
First, congratulations on your coming addition. Your poem reflects the joy and wonder the event engenders. A beautiful summation in a few words.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
Comment from Whitewave
livelylinda,
Few things in life can compare or be more magical than that - the long awaited first cry of your great grandson - a joy not many are privileged to experience. Your words and the picture you chose are a perfect match.
livelylinda,
Few things in life can compare or be more magical than that - the long awaited first cry of your great grandson - a joy not many are privileged to experience. Your words and the picture you chose are a perfect match.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image, Linda, and
congratulations on the expected new arrival.
-You have used your six words well to
describe the anticipation of the new great-grandson.
-I like the repetition of the 'ed' sound and
the concluding lines, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
-Very nice image, Linda, and
congratulations on the expected new arrival.
-You have used your six words well to
describe the anticipation of the new great-grandson.
-I like the repetition of the 'ed' sound and
the concluding lines, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
Comment from John Ciarmello
Love this! I wish you congratulations in advance. This is well written and well thought. A possible keepsake for your GG. Thanks for sharing. Best, JohnC
Love this! I wish you congratulations in advance. This is well written and well thought. A possible keepsake for your GG. Thanks for sharing. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022