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Baby in Blue

Favorite grandson's first born son due in September.

67 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I think we can all identify with these words as we adore our Grandchildren and we are so happy when they are born as our legacy carries on in life, much enjoyed Linda and congratulations, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2022

Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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Thank you for sharing this poem. I like the bright picture. I know you can't wait to get that baby into your arms. Congratulations on your accomplishments. Have a great day.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2022

Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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'Baby in Blue ', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a privilege to read and review this talented poet's work. This is definitely a six. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2022

Comment from GARY MACLEAN
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He's coming, don't fret that. They always make it here. Then a few years later, maybe like 13, you wonder why you waited so anxiously. Not really, we have wonderful children (5) grandchildren (10) and great grandchildren (11) I don't know if I can make it for my first great-great-grandchild but Imma tryin'. They are all so much fun, especially when either I can go home or I can send them home. LOL

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2022

Comment from jake cosmos aller
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congratulations. I don't have children but I do now have great-grand nieces and nephews, Captures the mood in a haiku-like manner. Well done especially the interplay between forever
awaited
anticipated.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2022

Comment from GeraldShuler
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This is short and sweet and completely complete. You did a great job portraying the emotions of a great grand parent. That is hard to do successfully in a short poem, but you did it. Well done.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2022

Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
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First, congratulations on your coming addition. Your poem reflects the joy and wonder the event engenders. A beautiful summation in a few words.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2022

Comment from Whitewave
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livelylinda,
Few things in life can compare or be more magical than that - the long awaited first cry of your great grandson - a joy not many are privileged to experience. Your words and the picture you chose are a perfect match.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2022

Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice image, Linda, and
congratulations on the expected new arrival.
-You have used your six words well to
describe the anticipation of the new great-grandson.
-I like the repetition of the 'ed' sound and
the concluding lines, too.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2022

Comment from John Ciarmello
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Love this! I wish you congratulations in advance. This is well written and well thought. A possible keepsake for your GG. Thanks for sharing. Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2022