Comment from rockinm76233

Exceptional

excitement abounds. What will happen next? I will have to stayed tuned to find out. I'm so happy you are posting your work for us to share. Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 14-May-2022

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reply by the author on 14-May-2022

Thank you so much, RockinM, for your extra-special six-star review and kind words. I'm just an old boy being silly, trying to keep himself entertained. Doing something different than just reading all the time. LOL. I can't thank you enough for the outstanding review and encouragement. I appreciate you from the reading and reviewing departments.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Good

You've left a great hook. I can't wait for the next post.

Human sacrifices, unwittingly advancing to financial doom. & An ever-shuffling deck of unpredictability. (All your descriptions are really good, but I especially liked these two.)

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reply by the author on 14-May-2022

Thank you so much, Barbara, my dear, for taking time away from writing to read my foolishness. I hope I can put a smile on a few faces. I notice you gave me four stars, which is probably more than I deserve. LOL. But, you didn't list any suggestions to make it better, which isn't anything like your reviews from the past. And since you've given me better grading on much worse, I had to wonder . . . LOL. Much appreciated!

reply by barbara.wilkey on 14-May-2022

Thank you for bringing to my attention. My finger must have rolled. I have made the corrections. I can't believe I would ever give you anything less than five stars. If it happens again, please tell me. I tend to have this problem often.

reply by the author on 14-May-2022

Barbara, my dear, I do it all the time. I even did to you once. Thankfully, you knew I didn't mean it, and I was able to correct my mistake. I didn't think you had given me a four intentionally, but there's times that you would be justified in doing so. LOL. Hope you're having a wonderful weekend!

reply by barbara.wilkey on 14-May-2022

I am. I hope your weekend if restful and great.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Aw damn! How could you do that? What a way to keep a chump hanging and dangling. Just as it was about to jump off, you Mister Mean Gene, decided to call a halt. Now I am going to be champing at the bit, waiting for the next episode. Way to go. You know what you are doing. Bravo.

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reply by the author on 14-May-2022

Thank you so much, Nomi, for your generous review and encouraging comments. I'm just a nut case trying to keep myself entertained, but hopefully in the process I can grab a few smiles keep the attention of my Fanstory friends like you. I appreciate YOU!

reply by nomi338 on 14-May-2022

The end came as a shock. I was totally invested in what was going on and then...Aww!

reply by the author on 14-May-2022

Yes, and I apologize for leaving you hanging at the end. I don't have the patience to write a book, so sometimes I do these four to six part stories. Hoping that one chapter will get readers back for the next, but surprisingly, the reading number tend to go down. LOL. Thanks, my friend, and enjoy the rest of your weekend!

reply by nomi338 on 14-May-2022

Will do, and just know, I may be among your most loyal readers, especially if you continue producing stories like this one.

reply by the author on 14-May-2022

The feeling is mutual, my friend! I enjoy everything you post.