War Free World
4 Line Poem 2 4 4 12 Syllable Dedicated to Wise Men to Act 444 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
You have executed well your poem. It is clear and concise. I can understand reading it. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poetry. Thank you for sharing!
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You have executed well your poem. It is clear and concise. I can understand reading it. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poetry. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from dmt1967
This is a nice idea but I don't think man will stop war until he has the power over everything. The format suits this well written poem. Thank you for sharing and take care.
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This is a nice idea but I don't think man will stop war until he has the power over everything. The format suits this well written poem. Thank you for sharing and take care.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and presentation, Al Creator.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-In these difficult times, it is important to have faith.
-You have used good imagery to express that.
-I like your concluding line very much, and
hope that the whispers are heard.
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-Good artwork and presentation, Al Creator.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-In these difficult times, it is important to have faith.
-You have used good imagery to express that.
-I like your concluding line very much, and
hope that the whispers are heard.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from dragonpoet
I think most prayer fo peace. If all followed the voice of God then the Earth would be free fo war. I guess the font color change emphasizes the words you find most important.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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I think most prayer fo peace. If all followed the voice of God then the Earth would be free fo war. I guess the font color change emphasizes the words you find most important.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
You did very well getting your view out there; World without wars! Wow!
Your message screamed it in the picture above, as well as your awesome words.
I love your purposeful desire, and it's my desire as well. But who can hear a word God is saying as long as this chatter around (mostly politicians) the world, are so busy trying to convince us of the deception of the other guy, nobody trusts anyone anymore! And who can blame people like us?; tired of the chatter! Did you know that the words:" silent and listen" have the same letters?
Something to ponder.................
It has to start somewhere! .My grandfather (also a minister) was the closest thing to God that I ever knew in my life, and he always said that you could usually pick out the wisest man in the room, as he was the man mostly listening.
BTW; God woke me up at 3AM & led me to your poem. ð???
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You did very well getting your view out there; World without wars! Wow!
Your message screamed it in the picture above, as well as your awesome words.
I love your purposeful desire, and it's my desire as well. But who can hear a word God is saying as long as this chatter around (mostly politicians) the world, are so busy trying to convince us of the deception of the other guy, nobody trusts anyone anymore! And who can blame people like us?; tired of the chatter! Did you know that the words:" silent and listen" have the same letters?
Something to ponder.................
It has to start somewhere! .My grandfather (also a minister) was the closest thing to God that I ever knew in my life, and he always said that you could usually pick out the wisest man in the room, as he was the man mostly listening.
BTW; God woke me up at 3AM & led me to your poem. ð???
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from country ranch writer
We all look around at the mass destruction and we wonder how it all began and why.God has answered so many prayers that his miracles are wearing pretty thin as we must believe and stay strong during these trying times.
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We all look around at the mass destruction and we wonder how it all began and why.God has answered so many prayers that his miracles are wearing pretty thin as we must believe and stay strong during these trying times.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from country ranch writer
We all look around at the mass destruction and we wonder how it all began and why.God has answered so many prayers that his miracles are wearing pretty thin as we must believe and stay strong during these trying times.
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We all look around at the mass destruction and we wonder how it all began and why.God has answered so many prayers that his miracles are wearing pretty thin as we must believe and stay strong during these trying times.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from jwsteele
Sir,
Wisdom is in the mind of the beholder and in my mind you are very wise. I have tried to remain in the guidelines to respond. In my view wise men don't control this world evil men do. Their authority usurps the will of rational people. God does not create wars, pandemics, or pedophilia the Demiurge does. He admits this in his Bible. It uses its minions in powerful places to accomplish It's ends. Thank you for sharing this poem and the clarity.
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Sir,
Wisdom is in the mind of the beholder and in my mind you are very wise. I have tried to remain in the guidelines to respond. In my view wise men don't control this world evil men do. Their authority usurps the will of rational people. God does not create wars, pandemics, or pedophilia the Demiurge does. He admits this in his Bible. It uses its minions in powerful places to accomplish It's ends. Thank you for sharing this poem and the clarity.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Hi, ALCREATOR LITT DEAR, I totally agree with your words on peace and God's involvement. He could, with one sweep of His hand, stop all wars, rid the world of evil, and leave the word peaceful. But He won't. Only God knows how this Ukraine war will end, and the other countries that are living in fear. But like all parents, He is waiting for us to work through the wars, and be good neighbours always. Well done, you used your words well. :) Sandra xx
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Hi, ALCREATOR LITT DEAR, I totally agree with your words on peace and God's involvement. He could, with one sweep of His hand, stop all wars, rid the world of evil, and leave the word peaceful. But He won't. Only God knows how this Ukraine war will end, and the other countries that are living in fear. But like all parents, He is waiting for us to work through the wars, and be good neighbours always. Well done, you used your words well. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from royowen
Jesus came to Earth to offer His peace, being the Prince of Peace, come to me you who are heavy laden and I will give you rest, beautifully written my friend, excellent job, blessings Roy
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Jesus came to Earth to offer His peace, being the Prince of Peace, come to me you who are heavy laden and I will give you rest, beautifully written my friend, excellent job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
