A God's Will
12 Word One Sentence Spiritual Fiction Contest God's Will53 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
"A God's Will'
12 word-1 Sentence Spiritual Fiction Writing Prompt Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
This read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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"A God's Will'
12 word-1 Sentence Spiritual Fiction Writing Prompt Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
This read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from Terry Broxson
I believe you have successfully jumped through all the hoops necessary for the contest. Good luck. As far as the message is concerned there is an old proverb that says "from your lips to God's ears!" Terry.
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I believe you have successfully jumped through all the hoops necessary for the contest. Good luck. As far as the message is concerned there is an old proverb that says "from your lips to God's ears!" Terry.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from Shirley McLain
I heartily agree with your poem. I think war is man's downfall on so many levels, and what is happening now breaks my heart. You did a fine job with this poem and met the requirements. Have a good evening. Shirley
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I heartily agree with your poem. I think war is man's downfall on so many levels, and what is happening now breaks my heart. You did a fine job with this poem and met the requirements. Have a good evening. Shirley
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from lyenochka
Well, that would mean a lot of men would go to hell tomorrow. As God's grace is so much bigger than we can imagine, I think He will remain patient with us. Good job in using all the required words in your twelve word sentence. Best wishes in the contest!
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Well, that would mean a lot of men would go to hell tomorrow. As God's grace is so much bigger than we can imagine, I think He will remain patient with us. Good job in using all the required words in your twelve word sentence. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from Maria Millsaps
This Contest Entry has the use of the 3 required word: God, Heaven, Hell. It has a use of single period, and has no other punctuation marks. God, heaven and punishment are all words packed within religious doctrines, so I was a bit confused with the prerequires.
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This Contest Entry has the use of the 3 required word: God, Heaven, Hell. It has a use of single period, and has no other punctuation marks. God, heaven and punishment are all words packed within religious doctrines, so I was a bit confused with the prerequires.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from karenina
Again, I say I find these sorts of contests so limiting in rules and parameters I'm not sure what is left of the creative process, once one marches in lockstep with every nuanced direction. That being said, you've met the criteria, near as I can tell from all the fine print. Not sure I agree that all men engaged in war will be sent to hell. What of those defending their homeland? Ah, well... It's a matter of perspective.
Karenina
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Again, I say I find these sorts of contests so limiting in rules and parameters I'm not sure what is left of the creative process, once one marches in lockstep with every nuanced direction. That being said, you've met the criteria, near as I can tell from all the fine print. Not sure I agree that all men engaged in war will be sent to hell. What of those defending their homeland? Ah, well... It's a matter of perspective.
Karenina
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from Anne Johnston
You have followed the rules for this contest entry. And it certainly is fiction, because God does not send anyone to Hell. Each person must make a choice, to serve God or reject Him.
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You have followed the rules for this contest entry. And it certainly is fiction, because God does not send anyone to Hell. Each person must make a choice, to serve God or reject Him.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Oh, they are going to Hell. You do not kill and mangle innocent people and expect to go to heaven. They are thieves in the night. Lurking around corners. Thank you for this awareness poem.
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Oh, they are going to Hell. You do not kill and mangle innocent people and expect to go to heaven. They are thieves in the night. Lurking around corners. Thank you for this awareness poem.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from pa Banardi
I thought it was good poem ...statement and means a lot....the picture was a little strange...I don't think God will judge us that way......remember he is a merciful God so we don't know how we will be judge
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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I thought it was good poem ...statement and means a lot....the picture was a little strange...I don't think God will judge us that way......remember he is a merciful God so we don't know how we will be judge
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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(1) 100% wrong sentences (please read below, I have explained and clarified, and also edited some of your words)
(2) incorrect words,
(3) incomplete sentences,
(4) grammatically wrong expressions,
(5) misinterpreted words,
(6) wrong thoughts,
(7) unsolicited words,
(8) wrong interpretations,
(9) inexpressive expression,
(10) inexpressive sentences,
(11) advice wrongly expressed,
(12) suggested in a wrong sentence,
So, I could not understand anything that you have written, please a 1 DAY OLD NEW HONOURABLE AND WISE MEMBER OF THIS SITE, please explain and clarify your words.
I cannot make out head and tail of your points or expression, so my wise reviewer please explain and clarify your wise points by writing correct, proper and grammatically correct sentences so that I can follow and understand your explanations and clarifications.
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I thought it was good poem ...statement and means a lot....the picture was a little strange...I don't think God will judge us that way......remember he is a merciful God so we don't know how we will be judge
PLEASE I HAVE TRIED TO EDIT YOUR WORDS OR SENTENCES YOU HAVE SENT AS A REVIEW:
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I thought it was good poem ...statement and means a lot....the picture was a little strange...I don't think God will judge us that way......remember he is a merciful God so we don't know how we will be judge
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EDITED:
(1) I thought it was good poem (a wrong group of words, an incomplete sentence, the first line or the first half sentence is incomplete) EDITED:
I thought it was a good poem
(A) Moreover, you have written entirely wrong, this is not a poem, this is only a SPIRITUAL FICTION
(B) Besides, I am sure, you HAVE NOT READ THE WORK, NOT READ THE AUTHOR NOTES AND NOT READ THE WRITING PROMPT, MANY TIMES IN MANY SENTENCES CONTEST RULES, CONTEST LIMITATIONS AND OTHER DETAILS I HAVE GIVEN OR MENTIONED, BUT YOU HAVE NOT READ ANYTHING, SEEMS YOU HAVE READ 000% - 001% I write this keeping in view of your words you have filled for making a review
(C) ...statement and means a lot....
( this is not a sentence, it is an incomplete group of words, grammatically wrong so I cannot edit this groups of words)
(D) the picture was a little strange?. (I do not understand this incomplete sentence or expression, please clarify and explain what do you mean by this incomplete joined words)
(E) I don't think God will judge us that way...... (I do not understand this incomplete, inexpressive, wrong groups of words, so please explain and clarify your points to follow or understand your points, viewpoint, views, thoughts, words, absolutely I do not understand what you have tried to mean by the words: that way, I have so many questions on the two words, so please explain and clarify your these two words)
(F) remember he is a merciful God so we don't know how we will be judge (again, this is an incomplete sentence, grammatically wrong sentence, inexpressive expression, wrong use of words, wrong punctuation, (i) missing comma after the word remember, again I do not understand by the use of word (ii) ?he? you have used the word he to refer to who or whom, it is wrong for you have used the word ?he?, correct word is ?He? because God is addressed as He not as he as you have written, so it is a wrong use of word; (iii) again I do not understand these words, for this is grammatically wrong, wrong use of verb judge, and there is no correct use of punctuation, so it is incomplete and wrong: (iv) how we will be judge (correct: how we will judge or how we shall judge or how we will be judged, or how we shall be judged, or how we will be judged (.) at the end a period mark be given, you have not used full stop or period, the punctuation mark, so it is not a sentence, or incomplete or wrong sentence, or wrongly joined words, so please explain and clarify what you have tried by writing such groups of words.
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(J) I know you know, understand, feel or realize how much loss you have caused to me by not reading and writing the review and by making a wrong endeavour
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Comment from LJbutterfly
This twelve word, one sentence spiritual fiction contest has challenging requirements, made more challenging since three words are dictated. You have successfully met the challenge. The very last word of your piece lends a bit of humor to your story. Best wishes in the contest.
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This twelve word, one sentence spiritual fiction contest has challenging requirements, made more challenging since three words are dictated. You have successfully met the challenge. The very last word of your piece lends a bit of humor to your story. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022