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Cloak of faith.

A poem

48 total reviews 
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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You have used an expressive blend of figures of speech to convey a powerful message about faith, which must be nurtured, kept active and strong through prayer.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
    Thanks Janice, for these fantastic comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Roy,
Your understanding of the word is great. I'm so glad that you are able to speak freely of your faith and share with all who read what you say. I'm sure that your reward will be in relation to the faithfulness that you've shown.
Have a blessed day.
Tom

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
    Thanks Tom, for these fantastic comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Anne Johnston
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"As mustard seeds are small in size,
as faith's a dream, it births its prize."
Great description of faith, and I love the scriptures you have chosen to illustrate your well-written poem.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
    Thanks Anne, for these fantastic comments and a great review, blessings Roy
reply by Anne Johnston on 05-Mar-2022
    You are welcome, Roy
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
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Faith is a fascination thing--an you are correct it is a gift to have it. Your references and words are well chosen and he form and rhyming cuplets well thought out.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
    Thanks Nancy, for these fantastic comments and a great review, blessings Roy
reply by NANCY V. FORREST on 05-Mar-2022
    :-)

Comment from Janet Foor
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Beautiful poem Roy. I could not get through the day without my faith. It is like breathing for me. Essential and necessary for life.
Your words brightens my day.

Thank you my friend.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
    Thanks Janet, for these fantastic comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from karenina
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I love your metaphor of faith as a "wrap"--for it infers we can lean to embrace another, who may be chilled by doubt, and warm them with the truth of Jesus, our Savior... It may be "an invisible realm" to our earthly vision...but oh, the eternal beauty of belief extends to the heavens!

Karenina

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
    Thanks Karen, for these fantastic comments and a great review, blessings Roy
reply by karenina on 05-Mar-2022
    Have a wonderful weekend!
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
    You too
Comment from Rachel Jamerson1
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Excellent job of addressing faith. It is not only essential spiritually but in the natural realm also. I also agree it is a difficult thing to describe or explain.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
    Thanks Rachel, for these fantastic comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Eternal Muse
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A beautiful poem of faith and its importance in our lives. Beautiful spiritual imagery, visuals, rhyming and meter. Excellent message.

Loved these:

For God has said one must have faith,
to overcome doubt's evil wraith.
Yet this I know, one's faith's a gift,
that lights the dark, a mountain shift.

I am all out of sixes unfortunately, but it's a virtual six.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
    Thanks for these fantastic comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I can't imagine living without faith. How could one have any hope at all without it? I don't know if I told you this before but one of my science professors said during a microbiology class once, that the more he studied science the stronger his belief in God got. I understand, the longer I live and the more I see and learn the stronger my faith.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
    Thanks Barbara, for these fantastic comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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We could not get through another day if we did not believe in God and have faith, trust and love in Him. I really like your poem. Faith is so necessary, it is the belief in God.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
    Thanks Rosemary, for these fantastic comments and a great review, blessings Roy