Paw Prints on Your Heart
Letting go, even though it hurts37 total reviews
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
What a beautifully written poem. I had goose bumps by the end. Your writing is honest and full of love. The descriptive words that you chose created memorable imagery. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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What a beautifully written poem. I had goose bumps by the end. Your writing is honest and full of love. The descriptive words that you chose created memorable imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much! Really, it means the world to me.
Comment from lancellot
I am a fan of rhyming couplets and I like the story in poetic form you made with them. It is not always easy to have 100% end rhymes in this form.
Also, you did well with the presentation matching theme too.
Good luck in the contest.
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I am a fan of rhyming couplets and I like the story in poetic form you made with them. It is not always easy to have 100% end rhymes in this form.
Also, you did well with the presentation matching theme too.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Pets. unsure how life would be without them
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Pets. unsure how life would be without them
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a cute idea, writing the poem from the dog's point of view. Two small fixes: I will never forget the walks we (had); We may have (said) our last goodbye. I'd suggest working on your rhythm & length of lines to make them more consistent, for a higher score. So sorry for the loss of your pet. You chose the perfect picture for your words. Best wishes in the contest.
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This is a cute idea, writing the poem from the dog's point of view. Two small fixes: I will never forget the walks we (had); We may have (said) our last goodbye. I'd suggest working on your rhythm & length of lines to make them more consistent, for a higher score. So sorry for the loss of your pet. You chose the perfect picture for your words. Best wishes in the contest.
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
Comment from Raul1
You have very good rhyming patterns. It flows well and has clarity. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
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You have very good rhyming patterns. It flows well and has clarity. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
Comment from mermaids
This is a wonderful doggy poem. I like your two line verses that are smooth and touch the heart. All pet people can relate to your words. Excellent flow of rhyming words.
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This is a wonderful doggy poem. I like your two line verses that are smooth and touch the heart. All pet people can relate to your words. Excellent flow of rhyming words.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
Comment from jessizero
I liked your poem. It reminded me of my boston terrier, Lainie. She's been gone for almost seven years now, but, as you said, her paw prints are forever on my heart. You really captured the relationship between a pet and their human. Keep up the good work.
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I liked your poem. It reminded me of my boston terrier, Lainie. She's been gone for almost seven years now, but, as you said, her paw prints are forever on my heart. You really captured the relationship between a pet and their human. Keep up the good work.
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2022