Rivers of time
A poem.51 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem is well written, Roy. I enjoyed reading it. Yes, you will go where God leads you. Thanks for the notes, too. Your line are smooth flowing with good rhymes and great imagery. The image is a good pairing, too.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Your poem is well written, Roy. I enjoyed reading it. Yes, you will go where God leads you. Thanks for the notes, too. Your line are smooth flowing with good rhymes and great imagery. The image is a good pairing, too.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much Jan, for these outstanding comments a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Irish Rain
So pretty Mr. Roy.
Time is certainly flying by, faster
and faster each year.
Which brings my Heaven closer, so,
as your poem states, no point in
worrying about time, or clinging to it.
We are without end.
Love this,
blessings...
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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So pretty Mr. Roy.
Time is certainly flying by, faster
and faster each year.
Which brings my Heaven closer, so,
as your poem states, no point in
worrying about time, or clinging to it.
We are without end.
Love this,
blessings...
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much Judy, for these outstanding comments a great review, blessings Roy
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Have a great Wednesday!!
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You too
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Rivers of time,' is an exceptionally well-written and deftly descriptive piece. It was a privilege to read and review this talented poet's work. This is a truly awe-inspiring work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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'Rivers of time,' is an exceptionally well-written and deftly descriptive piece. It was a privilege to read and review this talented poet's work. This is a truly awe-inspiring work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much Duchess, for these outstanding comments a great review, blessings Roy
Roy my friend you certainly deserved both.
Bless you
the Duchess
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Well done
Thank you.
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Bless you
Comment from Bridge
A well written poem . I agree with the basic thought expressed in your poem . I think the artwork adds to the appeal of your poem . I enjoyed your poem
With regards
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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A well written poem . I agree with the basic thought expressed in your poem . I think the artwork adds to the appeal of your poem . I enjoyed your poem
With regards
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much, for these outstanding comments a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, I love the whole read-though your last stanza is the most powerful, faith cannot be an empty shell as you say otherwise hell is our only option, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Excellent, I love the whole read-though your last stanza is the most powerful, faith cannot be an empty shell as you say otherwise hell is our only option, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much Kim, for these outstanding comments a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Eternal Muse
I really enjoyed your poem. Great rhyme, meter, flow and wisdom in those words. I appreciate the scriptural references in your author notes too. Loved the spirituality of it, it brings comfort to a soul, and the importance of faith.
Favorite lines, among many:
For I embrace what futures bring,
and yet to time I do not cling.
My life's contained in timeless climes,
not in the realms of clock-borne chimes.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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I really enjoyed your poem. Great rhyme, meter, flow and wisdom in those words. I appreciate the scriptural references in your author notes too. Loved the spirituality of it, it brings comfort to a soul, and the importance of faith.
Favorite lines, among many:
For I embrace what futures bring,
and yet to time I do not cling.
My life's contained in timeless climes,
not in the realms of clock-borne chimes.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks, for these wonderful comments review, blessings Roy
Comment from June Sargent
There is no limit to time - or to God's wisdom. Whatever happens and whenever it happens will be for our own good. Meanwhile,we need to make our time count, rather than just counting time.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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There is no limit to time - or to God's wisdom. Whatever happens and whenever it happens will be for our own good. Meanwhile,we need to make our time count, rather than just counting time.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much June, for these outstanding comments a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from dragonpoet
Roy,
This poem is a nice statement of faith and that it helps you in the good and bad times. Time becomes eternal for the believer.
Keep writing and say healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Roy,
This poem is a nice statement of faith and that it helps you in the good and bad times. Time becomes eternal for the believer.
Keep writing and say healthy
Joan
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much Joan, for these outstanding comments a great review, blessings Roy
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Don't mention it, Roy,
Joan
Comment from Paul McFarland
I always wonder what lies just around the bend. I believe there is a spirit world there. I don't know all the ins and outs that go on there, and I wonder if God lives there, or does He reside somewhere else.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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I always wonder what lies just around the bend. I believe there is a spirit world there. I don't know all the ins and outs that go on there, and I wonder if God lives there, or does He reside somewhere else.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much Paul, for these outstanding comments a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from MissMerri
The message in this neatly scribed poem is clear and timely (lol) and certainly of value to each of us. I enjoyed it very much and hope it resonates with everyone who reads it. I think my favorite part is the very first four lines:
What lies around the bend, you ask,
what future holds behind its mask?
We'll never know the road ahead,
yet trust is best, be Spirit-led.
Your author notes accentuate the important message, which I also love... God is in control and whether we agree or not, His will is to be done "on earth as it is in Heaven." So we might as well trust and obey. Great rhyming and perfect meter... as always. MM
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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The message in this neatly scribed poem is clear and timely (lol) and certainly of value to each of us. I enjoyed it very much and hope it resonates with everyone who reads it. I think my favorite part is the very first four lines:
What lies around the bend, you ask,
what future holds behind its mask?
We'll never know the road ahead,
yet trust is best, be Spirit-led.
Your author notes accentuate the important message, which I also love... God is in control and whether we agree or not, His will is to be done "on earth as it is in Heaven." So we might as well trust and obey. Great rhyming and perfect meter... as always. MM
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much Adonna, for these outstanding comments a great review, blessings Roy
