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The Return

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Erotic Turmoil

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Comment from nancy_e_davis
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I'm wondering is Margot, Meg, re-incarnated? She is much braver than I would be. I would have vacated the place long before.
You certainly have a great imagination, Sandra. What a love story!

Hopefully Bessie will be able to fill her in on the complete story and she can help reunite Miles and Meg in the hereafter.

Well done as always. Nancy:) xxx

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
    Ah, now, that is a good question, but only time will answer that. Thank you so much, Nancy, for the golden star and lovely review. This will be quite a love story by the time I've finished it. Love and hugs, sweet friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I'm sorry that I have missed a few chapters because I was in Florida. But I have no problem reading this chapter because of the character introduction in the end.

I'm curious about what has happened to Margot in the end.

I have one suggestion: Can we talk over a cup of that nice coffee?'

I was told that "nice" has been overused and a different word might be better.

Exceptionally done.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
    Hi Jasmine, thank you so much for this lovely review. It's lovely to see you back. I hope you had a lovely time in Florida.
    Margot has a lot of research to do, and perhaps then she will know what's going on in her life. I'll take a look at that sentence and see if I can change 'nice' to another word. Thank you for that. And a big thank you for the sixth shiny star, my friend! That was so sweet of you. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from Begin Again
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

sitting o the edge of my chair screaming more...more...more, but at the same time I am shivering wondering what lies ahead for poor Margot. If the real Meg lies in the grave next to him, why does Miles still believe Margot is Meg? Of course, this is where you wanted me to be, right?

It's a wonderful chapter and you do it so perfectly. I am glad that Margot got mad at Bessie and doesn't want to continue being strung along...but I still believe it will be a hard nut to crack. Bessie's dedication lies with her loyalty to Miles.

Awesome. Great job!

Smiles and hugs and lots of love to you my wonderful friend.
Always, Carol



almost touching Meg's. (is this missing something?)

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
    Thank you, dear Carol. Yes, you are right, she is very loyal to Miles, but there is a good reason for that as well. What does Margot have to do to convince Meg and Miles she is not Meg. Or, what do they have to do to convince Margot she is? What a mix-up!! Lol. Thank you for the shiny sixth star, dear friend. Love and hugs. Sandra xx
Comment from BethShelby
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This is very intriguing supernatural love story. Margot needs to leave that place, but it seems she wouldn't be able to leave. She is controlled by something beyond herself. I'm wondering if she is Meg reincarnated. Bessie seems to have been the maid for the original Meg. I can't wait to see where this story is headed.

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 Comment Written 13-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
    Thank you so much, Beth, for another lovely review. I think you will really enjoy the ending when it finally comes. Not yet for a while, though. Thanks, my friend. :)) Sandra xx