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Comment from Thatguypk
Very good nonet. Isn't it so often the case that shy and introvert people can find themselves and reveal themselves through verse or writing in general. We're a weird bunch. :-) Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
PK
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Very good nonet. Isn't it so often the case that shy and introvert people can find themselves and reveal themselves through verse or writing in general. We're a weird bunch. :-) Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
PK
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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thank you guy :-)
Comment from Jaclyn Emma
I can totally relate to the emotions you express in the poem. You nicely capture the life of an introvert - bursting with ideas but a voice that is not fully grown. Good luck!
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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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I can totally relate to the emotions you express in the poem. You nicely capture the life of an introvert - bursting with ideas but a voice that is not fully grown. Good luck!
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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thank you jaclyn :-)
any suggestions to get that fifth star?
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You're welcome Shelley (:
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I can identify with your words here as we often keep our emotions hidden yet they spill out onto the page when we write, a fine nonet for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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I can identify with your words here as we often keep our emotions hidden yet they spill out onto the page when we write, a fine nonet for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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thank you dolly :-)
Comment from Janetsue
This is an excellent nonet sharing your inner self through creative writing. It is an excellent entry in the contest. I have always liked writings about writing and this one especially. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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This is an excellent nonet sharing your inner self through creative writing. It is an excellent entry in the contest. I have always liked writings about writing and this one especially. Best wishes!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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thank you spangle :)
Comment from DeboraDyess
OH... This is so good. I also believe that pretending is an art form and the result of it is writing, acting, or composing. But to capture this in such a beautiful poem... Amazing.
I think you should do very well in the contest!
Blessings,
Deb
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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OH... This is so good. I also believe that pretending is an art form and the result of it is writing, acting, or composing. But to capture this in such a beautiful poem... Amazing.
I think you should do very well in the contest!
Blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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thank you debora :)
Comment from Anne Johnston
Great entry for the Nonet contest, very well done. I am glad that you are able to put in writing the words that you cannot say, and thus you share yourself with your pen.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Great entry for the Nonet contest, very well done. I am glad that you are able to put in writing the words that you cannot say, and thus you share yourself with your pen.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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thank you anne :)
Comment from Laurie Holding
Oh NOOO! I think we're in the same Nonet Contest together, so I'm doomed! This was just wonderfully done, and I tip my hat to you for using that form. Good luck to you!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Oh NOOO! I think we're in the same Nonet Contest together, so I'm doomed! This was just wonderfully done, and I tip my hat to you for using that form. Good luck to you!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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LOL! thank you laurie :-)
Comment from Terry Broxson
A very nice poem for this contest, good luck. I think it is hard to write a nonet poem, and even harder to write a good one. You have done that. It would also seem that you made it biographical as well. Well-done.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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A very nice poem for this contest, good luck. I think it is hard to write a nonet poem, and even harder to write a good one. You have done that. It would also seem that you made it biographical as well. Well-done.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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cool! thank you terry :)
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I liked this piece. I think what's good about it is that it would work if rearranged or formatted differently just as well which shows its poetic credentials and not a piece wrangled into a format.
very nice
GMG
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Hi there,
I liked this piece. I think what's good about it is that it would work if rearranged or formatted differently just as well which shows its poetic credentials and not a piece wrangled into a format.
very nice
GMG
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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thank you gmg :-)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your nonet is very expressive, self-revealing, and descriptive. Sometimes our most creative poems are engendered during our flights of fancy, when we write things we'd probably never SAY. Excellent
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Your nonet is very expressive, self-revealing, and descriptive. Sometimes our most creative poems are engendered during our flights of fancy, when we write things we'd probably never SAY. Excellent
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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yup!! thank you janice :-)