The Inn at Blackpool
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "The Ode to Grendy Frump"These are free-verse poems.
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Comment from Paul McFarland
This is a great tale in a ballad rhythm. The meter could be smoothed out some, but the story makes up for this.
I'll raise a glass to Grendy Frump
Who gave the redcoats chase
On the Saratoga battlefield,
A wild and bloody place.
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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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This is a great tale in a ballad rhythm. The meter could be smoothed out some, but the story makes up for this.
I'll raise a glass to Grendy Frump
Who gave the redcoats chase
On the Saratoga battlefield,
A wild and bloody place.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you .......you are right....I am a little scattershot with these.....but have great fun squishing them together....Godspeed and Good Luck to you......Stu Harrell