Comment from Ritsal

Excellent

It's all too easy to forget the true meaning of the season and the reason for celebrating. You reminded us in a lovely fashion. Best wishes, and
Merry Christmas!

Rita

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021

Thanks so much Rita, for these excellent comments and a great review, merry Christmas and blessings Roy

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Thank you for turning our focus onto Jesus and the real reason we celebrate Christmas. I loved the rhymes and gentle flow and think this is a lovely piece of poetry, Roy. Merry Christmas!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021

Thanks Melissa, for these super comments and review, merry Christmas and blessings Roy

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

This is a lovely poem for Christmas. The story that we all know so well, but told with good, solid rhymes that resound clearly throughout. As I've already told you, my grandson will be certain you're writing just for him.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021

Thanks so much Kate, for these excellent comments and a great review, merry Christmas and blessings Roy

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

A lovely poem about the true meaning of Christmas. You have a way with words, your poetry always captures my heart. I hope you and your family have a very merry Christmas and a happy new year. :)

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021

Thanks so much for these excellent comments and a great review, merry Christmas and blessings Roy

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

happy Christmas to you and your family. I enjoyed your Christmas poem written in your usual perfect style.I particularly liked the expression that Christ donned humility for frail humanity...
have a great Christmas.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021

Thanks so much for these excellent comments and a great review, merry Christmas and blessings Roy

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Good Morning, Roy!
A beautiful spiritual rendering of Christ's birth. His story never grows old, and all through this year, you surely have graced FanStory with His story and His impact on your life. Thank you!
And may you and yours have a glorious Christmas!
Here's to 2022!

Blessings,
diane

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021

Thanks so much Diane, for these excellent comments and a great review, merry Christmas and blessings Roy

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Sorry not to offer a higher rating; out of six for now. This poem explains it all. One blood atonement that offers life back to the giver in obedience. We are nothing but He is Lord.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021

Thanks again bro, for these excellent comments and a great review blessings Merry Christmas Roy

Comment from JLR

Excellent

Roy, thank you for your terrific poem about the most precious Christmas story that has touched every life - since the beginning of His birth. I am always eager to read from the perspective of another believer those golden gems that spark the poet's words. Blessings to you always!

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021

Thanks Jim, for these marvellous comments and a super review blessings Merry Christmas Roy

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

' He donned ', is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021

Thanks Duchess for these marvellous comments and a super review blessings Merry Christmas Roy

Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

A very nice Christmas poem, Roy. "Arrayed in flesh, a savior born" is a great line. Although there are many stories written about the birth of Christ, it never gets old.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021

Thanks Paul, for these marvellous comments and a super review blessings Merry Christmas Roy