My Heavenly Father
I am my Father's Child36 total reviews
Comment from ahamranji
Loved this simple poem that resonates with faith in the almighty father and in his protective shield.
"His mercy's real,
His grace abounds
I am my Father's child."
Lovely lines.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Loved this simple poem that resonates with faith in the almighty father and in his protective shield.
"His mercy's real,
His grace abounds
I am my Father's child."
Lovely lines.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your generous response and specific reference to the quoted verse. It's my favorite as well. Your review is much appreciated. God bless.
Comment from jaded831
What a beautiful poem. We never know what life has in store, but it is comforting to know God is watching out for His children. He keeps us safe in times of trouble but I feel Him in times of joy as well.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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What a beautiful poem. We never know what life has in store, but it is comforting to know God is watching out for His children. He keeps us safe in times of trouble but I feel Him in times of joy as well.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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What a beautiful and prophetic response to my poem! Thank you so much, expecially for that extra star. Wishing you God's blessings.
Comment from MissMerri
I can't imagine any possible way this poem could be improved. It has the flawless meter and rhyme that makes it flow so smoothly all the way through and it tells a beautiful story of sorrow turned to triumph. What more could we ask for? Even the illustration is inspiring. I loved everything about it and look forward to knowing who the author is. Best wishes in this contest. I think this will be a winner. MM
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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I can't imagine any possible way this poem could be improved. It has the flawless meter and rhyme that makes it flow so smoothly all the way through and it tells a beautiful story of sorrow turned to triumph. What more could we ask for? Even the illustration is inspiring. I loved everything about it and look forward to knowing who the author is. Best wishes in this contest. I think this will be a winner. MM
Comment Written 06-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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I can't find the words to express my gratitude for your incredibly beautiful review, especially the sixth star. It's absolutely amazing and I am stunned by it. A simple "thank you" is all I have in response, and that seems so feeble. God bless.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This General Poetry, My Father contest entry, speaks confidently in faith about your Heavenly Father as your real father on earth as you experienced to know him as Father's child; well said, well done, my dear write more, fast, carefully, thanks4sharing this, omniscient God reads-wishes forgive mistakes 2 encourage u; I, DR, per His will, love reviewing. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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This General Poetry, My Father contest entry, speaks confidently in faith about your Heavenly Father as your real father on earth as you experienced to know him as Father's child; well said, well done, my dear write more, fast, carefully, thanks4sharing this, omniscient God reads-wishes forgive mistakes 2 encourage u; I, DR, per His will, love reviewing. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your insightful review. I agree, God is our Father here on earth since we can expeience His kingdom now as Christ died and atoned for our sins. What a blessing we have!
Comment from Modee
Nice bit of poetry about our real Father in heaven. We all go through this life, some with dads, some without - but knowing that we are temporarily here and our read dad is in heaven, I guess that's pretty cool.
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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Nice bit of poetry about our real Father in heaven. We all go through this life, some with dads, some without - but knowing that we are temporarily here and our read dad is in heaven, I guess that's pretty cool.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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You've expressed the very essence of my poem in far fewer words than I could have myself. Thank you. I appreciate your review.
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
Powerful words about our Heavenly Father. All of us have some sort of problem or grief. No one is free from trouble. But one thing we can lean on is our Heavenly Father. Thanks for sharing and all the very best in the contest, Kit.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Powerful words about our Heavenly Father. All of us have some sort of problem or grief. No one is free from trouble. But one thing we can lean on is our Heavenly Father. Thanks for sharing and all the very best in the contest, Kit.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much. You're right -- God doesn't promise to keep us free from grief and trouble. He just promises to be with us in the midst of them. He'll bring us through. Thank you for your generous review, expecially the sixth star.