Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Beautiful! I set my Town of Bethlehem up yesterday and I felt so good last night as I sat alone by the fire, admiring it. It brought peace to me as your beautiful song does as well. Thank you for sharing, Roy.

Hugs, Carol

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 Comment Written 04-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021

Thanks Carol, for this great review and comments, blessings Roy

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Exceptional

A beautiful poem and song. I would love to hear it. It was just the sort of poem I wanted to read today. You in your element! Very appropriate for the season of great joy!

Take care,
Rhonda

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021

Thanks Rhonda for this splendid review and very kind, comments, blessings Roy

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi Roy Yes this has a nice rhythm and rhyme and tells the story of the birth of Jesus
Your kids will find this easy to sing (da da da da da da da dah da da da da da dah etc )
Cheers Chris

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021

Thanks Chris, for this splendid review and wonderful comments, blessings Roy

Comment from JLR

Exceptional

Roy, what a wondrous gift with this stanzaic poem set against a marvelous Holiday song for children. I love your juxtaposed poetic flow as I heard the music carried within each well crafted stanza, Powerful to say the least!

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021

Thanks Jim, for this splendid review and wonderful comments, blessings Roy