Momma's Songs
Music makes the sun shine.39 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, singing is the secret to generating a feeling and felling the glums that creeps into onto one's sphere sometimes, I know when I entertain people with my music it gives me, and stirs in my those joyful feelings of everything being right with the world. Beautifully written my friend, an excellent post, wrirren in abcb rhyming, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Oh yes indeed, singing is the secret to generating a feeling and felling the glums that creeps into onto one's sphere sometimes, I know when I entertain people with my music it gives me, and stirs in my those joyful feelings of everything being right with the world. Beautifully written my friend, an excellent post, wrirren in abcb rhyming, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you for this review.
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Thank you for this review.
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Welcome
Comment from MissMerri
I love your poem. It tells a beautiful story about mothers and love and influence and the power of music. I too was strongly influenced by my mother's music and both my parent's love of Jesus and truth. Thank you for your lovely spiritual poem. I enjoyed it immensely.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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I love your poem. It tells a beautiful story about mothers and love and influence and the power of music. I too was strongly influenced by my mother's music and both my parent's love of Jesus and truth. Thank you for your lovely spiritual poem. I enjoyed it immensely.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you. I am glad you relate!
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Thank you. I am glad you relate!
Comment from Anne Johnston
"For solace, I began to sing her songs,
for Jesus songs were ones that she adored
and as the notes fell from these lips of mine,
I felt her teaching me about her Lord."
What a great memory of your mother singing to you and teaching you about the Lord. There is so much truth in those old hymns that still stand today.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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"For solace, I began to sing her songs,
for Jesus songs were ones that she adored
and as the notes fell from these lips of mine,
I felt her teaching me about her Lord."
What a great memory of your mother singing to you and teaching you about the Lord. There is so much truth in those old hymns that still stand today.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Anne, thank you for your kind review.
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You are welcome
Comment from RGstar
A lovely write.
We see the inspiration and influence, the joy from one to another, unconsciously handed down...and believe me, it is nice when it is like this, unforced, just a silent transfer of love.
May the feeling long remain, and many a day of song and worship.
Best wishes,
Good luck in the competition.
RGstar
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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A lovely write.
We see the inspiration and influence, the joy from one to another, unconsciously handed down...and believe me, it is nice when it is like this, unforced, just a silent transfer of love.
May the feeling long remain, and many a day of song and worship.
Best wishes,
Good luck in the competition.
RGstar
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you for this kind and beautiful review.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Momma's Songs
Excellent poem about music and light.
I like your dedication to your mom. Mine died when I was ten years old so I understand. It's nice that you remember her when you sing.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Momma's Songs
Excellent poem about music and light.
I like your dedication to your mom. Mine died when I was ten years old so I understand. It's nice that you remember her when you sing.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the review and personal note. I am sorry you can relate.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This General Poetry, Spiritual writing prompt entry, speaks about music and light, on her last day, sun set, next day sun tells to sing; ; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this, write more, fast, time is limited, I, DR, wrote 114 books, R 123600/N21. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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This General Poetry, Spiritual writing prompt entry, speaks about music and light, on her last day, sun set, next day sun tells to sing; ; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this, write more, fast, time is limited, I, DR, wrote 114 books, R 123600/N21. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for your time and review.
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Thank you so much for your time and review.
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Thank you so much for your time and review.
Comment from Modee
Sad and happy are the feelings we have when a loved one dies and we know we will see them again. I lost my mother a couple of years ago, but know I will see her again. Thanks for this reading this morning. :)
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Sad and happy are the feelings we have when a loved one dies and we know we will see them again. I lost my mother a couple of years ago, but know I will see her again. Thanks for this reading this morning. :)
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you for your thoughts on my poem!
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Thank you for your thoughts on my poem!
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Thank you for your thoughts on my poem!
Comment from L. Stewart
Wow.
I'm lost for words. This was so moving, so beautiful, so connected to the Holy Spirit. Wow! Wow! Wow! I feel so honoured getting to even read this. Thank you for your vulnerability and honesty.
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Wow.
I'm lost for words. This was so moving, so beautiful, so connected to the Holy Spirit. Wow! Wow! Wow! I feel so honoured getting to even read this. Thank you for your vulnerability and honesty.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you so so much! I appreciate your words and stars!
Comment from LaChelle King
Mothers are so special and this was so sweet, but when you get to heaven she will be waiting at the gates for YOU and y'all will be singing together in the same place. You can feel the love you both had for one another. Thanks for the poem
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Mothers are so special and this was so sweet, but when you get to heaven she will be waiting at the gates for YOU and y'all will be singing together in the same place. You can feel the love you both had for one another. Thanks for the poem
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Comment Written 26-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thanks for the review! I can't wait to sing with her again. Could you suggest what I might have done better to warrant more stars? If you have any corrections for me, I would really like to have your thoughts:)