The Challenge
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Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Another great chapter in your script, Jay. As before, it never seems long. It's flawless and engaging. It also seems very believable for this age group. It sounds like something teen girls might pull.
On another level, there is some deeper issues at play. You are digging down into teen psychology, or human sexuality in general. Bravo, my friend.
I'll continue to follow your progress.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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Another great chapter in your script, Jay. As before, it never seems long. It's flawless and engaging. It also seems very believable for this age group. It sounds like something teen girls might pull.
On another level, there is some deeper issues at play. You are digging down into teen psychology, or human sexuality in general. Bravo, my friend.
I'll continue to follow your progress.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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Thank you, Rhonda, especially for taking this down a level. There will be different and deeper levels to explore next scene. Your six stars warm my heart.