Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

This is a truly beautiful one celebrating the arrival of a new day. Almost like a coronation or other grand event with heralds, a sense of awe, all nature taking part. Great work here, I really enjoyed it.
Wendy
Wendy

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Wendy, for these generous comments and great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante

Excellent

This is magnificent! I am a night owl, trying to become a morning person; I hope this will help inspire me.
This is truly lovely:
"God's mercy spreads its blanket,
as nature lifts its eyes.
The birth of morning's glowing.
in union Heaven sighs."
Thank you!

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 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Msry Kay,for these generous comments and great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Glorious paean to dawn--lovely and elegant imagery, flows flawlessly. Clever and fresh: as winds embrace the trees ... They raise their boughs to Heaven ... God's mercy spreads its blanket,



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 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Liz, for these generous comments and great review, blessings Roy