Comment from SHABAMO

Excellent

Thanks for writing this! I also love looking at clear and cloudy skies, just like I did as a kid. Your picture does the sentiment justice.

- Shabamo

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 Comment Written 31-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021

Thank you for the review and comments. I've been avoiding tanka and short works, but I thought I try one for a change. I do love cumulous clouds and as kid, I could lie on my back in the grass staring at the for hours.
Beth
Beth

reply by SHABAMO on 31-Aug-2021

I was avoiding stories before I was prompted to write one today...I can only come to the conclusion writing different types of things makes us better. I liked your short work and would encourage you to keep writing them :)

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is a nicely written tanka. Great overall presentation background colour and font. Very sweet photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 31-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021

Thank you so much for the review and comments. I'm not sure I've ever tried a tanka before but I do enjoy gazing at clouds.
Beth