Betrayal
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Comment from Begin Again
And we all live happily ever after until....an escape by Rapier maybe? Is that where our new story will begin? I know you have something brewing and I can't wait for another story to begin. My computer came on for a few minutes and I instantly searched for your post. Awesome as always and so full of love and charm...Perfect way to end one story and leave me wondering about another.
And so many children to be involved as well...twins and two other little ones...Wow! That's a handful around the same age. A story in itself. LOl
Loved every moment of it..... Best of luck with it my special friend.
Smiles and hugs and lots of love, Carol
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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And we all live happily ever after until....an escape by Rapier maybe? Is that where our new story will begin? I know you have something brewing and I can't wait for another story to begin. My computer came on for a few minutes and I instantly searched for your post. Awesome as always and so full of love and charm...Perfect way to end one story and leave me wondering about another.
And so many children to be involved as well...twins and two other little ones...Wow! That's a handful around the same age. A story in itself. LOl
Loved every moment of it..... Best of luck with it my special friend.
Smiles and hugs and lots of love, Carol
Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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Thank you so very much, my wonderful friend. I've enjoyed writing it. But, I'm going to give novels a break for a while, and write some poetry while I'm editing and getting this one published.
My next book is totally different again! Time travel and a ghost!
Thank you so much for the shiny six stars, and this wonderful review, my friend. I've loved all your reviews, and can't thank you enough for all the support you have given me. Sending you lots of love and hugs and smiles!! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Pantygynt
Aaaaaaaaah! A happy ending! Of course there had to be with a story like that. So what is next? Have you another one in store or are you going back to the children's books? Whichever I wish you all the best.
I am just about to post my next chapter so keep a look out for it.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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Aaaaaaaaah! A happy ending! Of course there had to be with a story like that. So what is next? Have you another one in store or are you going back to the children's books? Whichever I wish you all the best.
I am just about to post my next chapter so keep a look out for it.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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I do have another book in my head, but it's going to stay there for a while. I want a break from novels until my head starts screaming at me to write it. I'll be doing some poetry, perhaps another little poetry story/colouring book for a while. I've enjoyed writing this one and the one I have in my head it very different.
Thank you so much for this lovely review, the six stars and for your wonderful support throughout. I've really appreciated it all. Thanks, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xxxx (loved your chapter)
Comment from Ulla
Awe, Sandra, so this was the end and a happy one ,as well. I will miss the story. It's been with us for so long, and it was a great story and so well written. I'm glad the mother and and Colin got what they deserved.
I only have one small suggestion: ,he brought his lips down = ,he brought his mouth down.
A big hug, Ulla xxxx
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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Awe, Sandra, so this was the end and a happy one ,as well. I will miss the story. It's been with us for so long, and it was a great story and so well written. I'm glad the mother and and Colin got what they deserved.
I only have one small suggestion: ,he brought his lips down = ,he brought his mouth down.
A big hug, Ulla xxxx
Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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I'm glad you liked how I ended it, Ulla. Now I have to begin that awful editing routine, not a nice job. Lol.
Thank you so much for the golden sixth star, and this lovely review, my friend. You've been wonderful all through this story and I've really appreciated all your kind reviews. Sending you an extra big hug! :)) Sandra xxx
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Sandra, I have so enjoyed this story. I know what you mean by editing. I'm in middle of first book of the Fisherman. I will leave you to it and in a few weeks I'll ask where you are in the process. I would still love your help with the publishing on Amazon. But only when you are ready, after your book has been published. Xxx
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I'll let you know when this one is finished and then we'll work on yours. The editing is the worst part! LOL! Thanks for all your nice comments on this one, Ulla, it has meant such a lot to me. xxxx
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Thank you so very much. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Good luck with your editing xxxx
Comment from Sally Law
Double good in every way! Loved this and the happy ending. Children loved and growing in happy homes. Criminals behind bars and good times. Exceptional, dear girl. Take a bow!
Sending you my very best and love and blessings always,
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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Double good in every way! Loved this and the happy ending. Children loved and growing in happy homes. Criminals behind bars and good times. Exceptional, dear girl. Take a bow!
Sending you my very best and love and blessings always,
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much, Sal, I'm so pleased you enjoyed the final chapter, and a big hug for the sixth star! Now the really tiresome, hard work begins, the editing! Thanks, my friend, your support has been amazing. I've appreciated it so much. Warm hugs and love. :)) Sandra xx
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Take a rest before you plow through the edit. Just saying?. Blessings abundant, Sal xoxo
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That's a really good idea, Sal, I'll do that. Love and hugs, my friend. xxxx
Comment from BethShelby
Your created a really wonderful story and I am so pleased that I was able to read it all. I hope it will soon come out in book form. You are a remarkable and talented writer. I couldn't suggest anything at all to change.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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Your created a really wonderful story and I am so pleased that I was able to read it all. I hope it will soon come out in book form. You are a remarkable and talented writer. I couldn't suggest anything at all to change.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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Aww, thank you so very much, Beth, for your lovely comments. That is so sweet of you. I'm glad you enjoyed this book. I have some editing to do and then it will go to be edited by friend who used to be an editor. Once he has checked it over, I hope to publish it. Thank you for staying with me all the way through. Thank you for that golden sixth star, my friend, and all the support you've given me throughtout. I've really appreciated it all. Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Congratulations on this ending
and completing the book, Sandra.
-You must be over the moon.
-It was a lot of work, but you pulled it off.
-An excellent beginning with Tania now
a part of the team, followed by being
alone with Grant, and the lovely proposal.
-I liked the comparison to the Irish Riverdance!
-I liked the ending with the friends getting
together, and seeing them with their growing families.
-I thought it was a nice touch that
Peter and Latifah named their daughter after Tania.
-How did she know how to tell the twins apart-
because she was named after Tania?
-The ending discussion was a good way
to wrap things up with the various parties
involved in the wrong doings, and you
did it just right, even with a little humor
about Colin being in prison.
-Well done, and congratulations, again!!!
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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-Congratulations on this ending
and completing the book, Sandra.
-You must be over the moon.
-It was a lot of work, but you pulled it off.
-An excellent beginning with Tania now
a part of the team, followed by being
alone with Grant, and the lovely proposal.
-I liked the comparison to the Irish Riverdance!
-I liked the ending with the friends getting
together, and seeing them with their growing families.
-I thought it was a nice touch that
Peter and Latifah named their daughter after Tania.
-How did she know how to tell the twins apart-
because she was named after Tania?
-The ending discussion was a good way
to wrap things up with the various parties
involved in the wrong doings, and you
did it just right, even with a little humor
about Colin being in prison.
-Well done, and congratulations, again!!!
Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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Thank you so very much for this amazing review, Pam. I'm so pleased you enjoyed the ending. I knew a lady who had identical twins, and none of the family could tell them apart (apart from mum and dad) but their next door neighbours child who was the same age, knew exactly which one was which. I think children see more than we do. I did ask Graham if the 'little bit of humour' about Colin, would be alright, and he said, of course it is. I'm glad you mentioned it. Thank you my dear friend, for all your help, encouragement, and support throughout my story, you've been wonderful. Warm hugs, and love, :)) Sandra xxxx
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars, review, and support, Sandra. I have a terrible time telling twins apart. I had a number of them in my classes back in the day, and had to work at remembering who was who!
Comment from NABattaglia
Your use of dialogue really drives this chapter. It does really two things that are fantastic. First, it provides a lot of the action and description. Second, it really sets the pace of the scene in an appropriate manner, not too fast, not too slow. Well done :)
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Your use of dialogue really drives this chapter. It does really two things that are fantastic. First, it provides a lot of the action and description. Second, it really sets the pace of the scene in an appropriate manner, not too fast, not too slow. Well done :)
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Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, my friend. I really appreciate it. Warm hugs. :)) Sandra
Comment from ShirleyT1
What a great way to end this story of intrigue and love. I love a happy ending and that is what you provided in this well written final chapter. Great job with your characters, both the ones you love and those who you love to hate!
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What a great way to end this story of intrigue and love. I love a happy ending and that is what you provided in this well written final chapter. Great job with your characters, both the ones you love and those who you love to hate!
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Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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What a wonderful review, Shirley! I couldn't wish for a better one. I'm so pleased you enjoyed the ending. Now I've some editing to do, and some poetry to write before I begin my next novel. Thanks for the support you've given me. I really appreciated it. Warm hugs, Sandra