Betrayal
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Comment from Begin Again
Good morning, my friend...
Sandra, I couldn't wait for my Sunday Morning Sweet Read with my coffee. You have such a smooth way with your writing... one I wish I could manage. I just flow with your descriptions. I write the meat, but you add a extra later of seasoning to your stories that I just don't have. It's awesome.
And Grant's confrontation with this mother and brother was superb. She can take her arrogant self and thieving son to jail.....Hurrah!
And the budding relationship between Grant and Tania appears to have an opportunity to blossom fully in the final chapter when they are finally alone. I love the butterflies!
Smiles and hugs.... "To My Book of the Month" friend.....
I am sure you are headed in that direction and much higher when it is published. I loved the story, and I most certainly love you.
Always, Carol
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
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Good morning, my friend...
Sandra, I couldn't wait for my Sunday Morning Sweet Read with my coffee. You have such a smooth way with your writing... one I wish I could manage. I just flow with your descriptions. I write the meat, but you add a extra later of seasoning to your stories that I just don't have. It's awesome.
And Grant's confrontation with this mother and brother was superb. She can take her arrogant self and thieving son to jail.....Hurrah!
And the budding relationship between Grant and Tania appears to have an opportunity to blossom fully in the final chapter when they are finally alone. I love the butterflies!
Smiles and hugs.... "To My Book of the Month" friend.....
I am sure you are headed in that direction and much higher when it is published. I loved the story, and I most certainly love you.
Always, Carol
Comment Written 08-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
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Good morning to you, dear friend, I hope your Sunday is a good one.
Thank you so much, Carol, for this really lovely, and very complimentary review!! As for your writing, don't put yourself down, I can't wait to read yours when it comes on. I see I have one to read after I've replied to you. I am really happy, though, that you like my writing, that gives me such a boost to my confidence.
Now they are alone!!! Hmmm!
Thank you for that golden star, my friend, I've appreciated every review you've written, and can't thank you enough. Last part coming soon. Warm hugs, my wonderful friend. Love and hugs. Sandra xxxx :))
Comment from Sanku
That was a lot of things happening quick, Grant finally enjoyed watching his mother squirm falter. I hope there are no more surprises in the rapier-Colin-and-mrs harding triangle and that others could go back to their peaceful existence .Of course with some romantic attachments thrown in.
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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
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That was a lot of things happening quick, Grant finally enjoyed watching his mother squirm falter. I hope there are no more surprises in the rapier-Colin-and-mrs harding triangle and that others could go back to their peaceful existence .Of course with some romantic attachments thrown in.
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Comment Written 08-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much for another lovely review, Sanku. Of course the romantic attachements will be coming!! LOL. Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
Comment from Pantygynt
A fast moving episode, which is fine to begin with but you were making a number of basic errors in court and police procedures, which we have now sorted out. Now the baddies are under lock and key apart from mother but shew will be powerless without Colin to carry out her evil plans and the tag will restrict her movement somewhat.
This seems to be cruising towards a natural conclusion and a fairytale ending perhaps.
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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
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A fast moving episode, which is fine to begin with but you were making a number of basic errors in court and police procedures, which we have now sorted out. Now the baddies are under lock and key apart from mother but shew will be powerless without Colin to carry out her evil plans and the tag will restrict her movement somewhat.
This seems to be cruising towards a natural conclusion and a fairytale ending perhaps.
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Comment Written 08-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much, Jim, for another lovely review. And thanks for getting in touch with me to sort out the court procedures. I really appreciated that. Yes, I think the story is heading to it's final ending, and I hope everyone will be pleased with it. Thank you again, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx