Help My Unbelief
Essence Poem33 total reviews
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Amen! So true. I needed to read this very much. God's Word will help me through this difficult time I am going through, as will the important use of my faith -- which I must hold onto. I take up my sword (the Word) and shield (my faith), besides the full armor of God, described in Ephesians chapter 6. I promoted this because I would like more people to read it. We need to know about this and be aware of it, these days -- the more, the better.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Amen! So true. I needed to read this very much. God's Word will help me through this difficult time I am going through, as will the important use of my faith -- which I must hold onto. I take up my sword (the Word) and shield (my faith), besides the full armor of God, described in Ephesians chapter 6. I promoted this because I would like more people to read it. We need to know about this and be aware of it, these days -- the more, the better.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Mary Kay,
You are a sweet heart; thanks so much for this great review, very kind comments, six-star rating and for promoting what God has placed on my heart. You are truly one on God's angels.
Lots of love and Hugs...Portia
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You're very welcome, my sweet friend. I was just especially blessed by it. Thank you for what you wrote about me, in your response!
We are one body in Christ, everyone does their part :-)
I hope you and your family are doing well. Love and prayers, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Anne Johnston
Great words commemorating this scripture. That is a prayer that I pray many times, knowing that often my faith is weak, but that the Lord understands and He hears our prayers.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Great words commemorating this scripture. That is a prayer that I pray many times, knowing that often my faith is weak, but that the Lord understands and He hears our prayers.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Anne,
Thanks so much for your review and wise comments; they are greatly appreciated.
Hugs...Portia
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You are welcome, Portia
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your essence poem with the "more-your" internal rhymes and the "unbelief - relief" ending rhymes. So true that the Word of God supports our faith and keeps us on the right track. Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Great job with your essence poem with the "more-your" internal rhymes and the "unbelief - relief" ending rhymes. So true that the Word of God supports our faith and keeps us on the right track. Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 28-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Helen,
Thanks so much for your review and comments. However, I am a bit confused; I am told that my poem is not reflecting the internal rhymes. I guess the word used "your and more" will not work.
What am I missing?
Hugs...Portia
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I thought it worked fine. If you look up "your" in rhymezone, you'll find "more." I think it's because it flowed so naturally, that readers missed it. I had to read it twice to see the internal rhymes! Great job!!