Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

I would think finding out who the mole was in the group would also be a priority. Somebody had to know about Anna and the kids. Who told Rapier about them? I am beginning to wonder about Grant's business partner.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021

Ahh, you are getting warmer, but not warm enough! No, I'm not saying anymore than that!! LOL. Thank you so much for the lovely review, Barbara, and the shiny six stars. I'm so pleased you are still enjoying my story. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock

Exceptional

You have woven a good story here and it continues in a free and easy manner to be a very interesting novel. Grant's helpful friends lend a very
professional approach to the various aspects involved. They are a great team that plans well.

Ralf

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021

What a lovely review, Ralf. I like that you think it's written in a free and easy manner, I hate complicated books, so your review made my day. And sending you a humongous hug for the lovely six stars!! Take care and stay well, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

Safe back on the mainland the group now
have to deal with José's family, track
them down and get them to safety as well.
Then maybe they can get to the root of the evil.
Colin and Grant's mother Marilyn. Good job. Nancy:)

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021

Hi Nancy, thank you so much for this lovely review. Things will speed up now, especially seeing there are some children involved. Then Grant will be after his mother and step-brother! Fun ahead. Not too many parts to go. Warm hugs, my dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
How are you? I'm hoping your eyes are not getting any worse, or your breathing. I'm rooting for you, dear Nancy. xxxxx

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This was a good reunion for Tania and Monica, Now there the the probably of finding Rapier and making sure that Anna and her children or safe. Jose' is very worried and does like the idea not being about to go. I'm looking forward to seeing that evil man out of the picture. I'm enjoying this story.

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 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021

Poor Jose, but Grant was right not to let him go with them, not with his injuries. The team can get on without worrying about him. Thanks, Beth, for this lovely review. I'm delighted you are enjoying the story. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from Pantygynt

Exceptional

José's despair is understandable. It is most frustrating to be denied permission to take part in the action when it so closely concerns him, but it is for the best.

We are entering a new phase of this action-packed tale, and first up is the need to locate the quarry. Great stuff. I didn't notice any spag, so intent was i on turning the pages towards the next development.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021

Thank you so much, my wonderful friend, for the lovely review and the six stars. Yes, a new phase that will start to tie everything together. (That's the plan!) Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Gripping. You are a master story teller! So glad the immediate danger has passed. Please ease Jose's torment ASAP!


had the [debri=>DEBRIS] moved to the side of the road.

the drive was straightforward (one word)



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 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021

Lol, I will, poor man. Thanks so much, Liz for the lovely review, and for picking up those darned nits. I've corrected them now. There's not many more chapters to go but a lot to cram in. Thanks, my friend. :)) Sandra xx