Traveling Incognito
This can only happen to an oddball33 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Davis
This story's title incorporates the poem's theme and tone effectively.
The desire to compartmentalize different stages of one's life, and recall simpler times is one message it conveys.
The story is well composed and presented.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021
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This story's title incorporates the poem's theme and tone effectively.
The desire to compartmentalize different stages of one's life, and recall simpler times is one message it conveys.
The story is well composed and presented.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021
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Hi Sharon,
Excellent review and insightful thoughts on my attempt to try writing a short short story of a personal nature.
Your take on my entry is spot on!
All the best,
Senyai
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Hi Sharon,
Excellent review and insightful thoughts on my attempt to try writing a short short story of a personal nature.
Your take on my entry is spot on!
All the best,
Senyai
Comment from royowen
A nicely written short story, about a women who bumps into a man she once knew as a boy, so for those that need to revisit a happier time in their lives, who knows why, but that isn't the thrust. Well done, beautifully written good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021
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A nicely written short story, about a women who bumps into a man she once knew as a boy, so for those that need to revisit a happier time in their lives, who knows why, but that isn't the thrust. Well done, beautifully written good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021
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Hi Roy,
Thank you for such a great review and interesting thoughts on my work.
Both are truly appreciated!
All the best,
Senyai
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Well done
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Hi Roy,
Thank you for such a great review and interesting thoughts on my work.
Both are truly appreciated!
All the best,
Senyai
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Well done
Comment from Sherry Asbury
To see a picture of a child I knew or helped raise now an adult is a shock to the system. Always I see them as that child... Wherever that moon was when you wrote this was in a good phase...this is a sweet story and told by a master storyteller...
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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021
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To see a picture of a child I knew or helped raise now an adult is a shock to the system. Always I see them as that child... Wherever that moon was when you wrote this was in a good phase...this is a sweet story and told by a master storyteller...
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021
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Hi Sherry,
I thank you for such an insightful review and kind thoughts in my story.
Very much appreciated!
All the best,
Senyai
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Hi Sherry,
I thank you for such an insightful review and kind thoughts in my story.
Very much appreciated!
All the best,
Senyai