Betrayal
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Comment from Sally Law
Another fine chapter for your book. It sounds like the trip to the Bahamas was just the thing for Tania. Grant's starting with that husband thing. I like it. :))
Superb and six worthy, dear Sandra. A fine accomplishment.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Another fine chapter for your book. It sounds like the trip to the Bahamas was just the thing for Tania. Grant's starting with that husband thing. I like it. :))
Superb and six worthy, dear Sandra. A fine accomplishment.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for the lovely six stars, Sal! Your reviews are always so nice, I really appreciate them. I hope you had a lovely Easter, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xxxx
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You are most welcome!
Comment from damommy
This is a calm chapter, but I suspect something's about the break loose. Poor Monica's lost her job, but she has potential to start her own business. I'm sure we're not out of the woods yet.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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This is a calm chapter, but I suspect something's about the break loose. Poor Monica's lost her job, but she has potential to start her own business. I'm sure we're not out of the woods yet.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Nope, they have a bit more to sort out before it's finished, but not quite in the way you'd think. Lol. Thank you, dear SATP.
I love the song, Deck of Cards, I hadn't heard it in years. I'm keeping it so I can play it now and again. I just love the bear and her cubs. I love all these you're sending over. It's keeping a smile on my face. Thanks so much, you're marvelous. Love you lots. Sandra xxxx
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I'm so happy you're enjoying the things I send. I wonder sometimes if they interest you. I'm glad they do.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Love is in the air for both Tania and Monica. These men are solid and caring so Bravo! The story is gaining depth as it proceeds and I know there is much in the offing. Very well written.
Ralf
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Love is in the air for both Tania and Monica. These men are solid and caring so Bravo! The story is gaining depth as it proceeds and I know there is much in the offing. Very well written.
Ralf
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thanks, Ralf! I'm glad you're still enjoying the story! Hope you had a lovely Easter, my friend. Warm hugs. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Ben Colder
Sorry Monica was let go but I can understand the danger the others would be in. The boos was right.
Sounds as if Tanya is about to hit the jack pot with Grant. Love the Dolphins scene.
Good one Sandy.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Sorry Monica was let go but I can understand the danger the others would be in. The boos was right.
Sounds as if Tanya is about to hit the jack pot with Grant. Love the Dolphins scene.
Good one Sandy.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Monica will be fine, she's a strong character, and she has Jeff, of course! Lol. Thank you for the lovely stars, my friend, and the wonderful review. I'm glad you liked the dolphin part. Warm hugs and love, Sandy. ccc
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Perhaps Jeff will tell Grant what is happening and ask them to join him and Tania on the island. I think that would make both ladies happy. One thing. The pregnancy part set me back. It isn't clear Grant is talking to Latifah. I thought for a minute he was addressing Tania although I didn't think she was pregnant, Check it out. Otherwise good job. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Perhaps Jeff will tell Grant what is happening and ask them to join him and Tania on the island. I think that would make both ladies happy. One thing. The pregnancy part set me back. It isn't clear Grant is talking to Latifah. I thought for a minute he was addressing Tania although I didn't think she was pregnant, Check it out. Otherwise good job. Nancy:)
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Hi, Nancy, thank you so much for pointing that out, I've done an edit, and made it clear that it's Latifah who is pregnant. I can see how it was confusing once you'd pointed it out. I'm glad you enjoyed the rest. I hope your health is improving, my friend? Warm hugs. Sandra xx
Comment from Pantygynt
I can see Monica getting out to that island before she is very much older. I found the dolphin bit fascinating. When I was in the West Indies with the Grey Funnel Line we often had an escorting pod of dolphins keeping pace at 14 knots without trouble. This is going well now in the sun.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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I can see Monica getting out to that island before she is very much older. I found the dolphin bit fascinating. When I was in the West Indies with the Grey Funnel Line we often had an escorting pod of dolphins keeping pace at 14 knots without trouble. This is going well now in the sun.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this lovely review, Jim, and the shiny star. I've always liked dolphins, so it seemed only right to bring them into the story. I'm glad you liked it. Dolphins can go fast! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Begin Again
Awesome! All these strong men watching over the women they care and love. Makes me miss my Honey! Just the perfect amount of warmth and togetherness between all of them - no pushing or charging forward - just one step at a time. Of course, I love it! Haven't been able to write with Easter things happening and cooking all day. Hope I can soon. Just jumped on here to see if you had posted....Hurrah for me, you did! Warm wishes and Happy Easter to you! Smiles and Hugs - Carol
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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Awesome! All these strong men watching over the women they care and love. Makes me miss my Honey! Just the perfect amount of warmth and togetherness between all of them - no pushing or charging forward - just one step at a time. Of course, I love it! Haven't been able to write with Easter things happening and cooking all day. Hope I can soon. Just jumped on here to see if you had posted....Hurrah for me, you did! Warm wishes and Happy Easter to you! Smiles and Hugs - Carol
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Hi Carol, I hope you've had a lovely Easter Sunday. Thank you so much for this lovely review. I was really pleased to note you thought my romantic scenes were not overdone. It's hard to judge how much is right. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from BethShelby
This was another interesting chapter. Tania is healing fast and every day that goes by Grant seems to be more enamored with her. She is enjoying being kept safe so far away from her problems. Monica losing her job will no doubt force her to become self employed, which will work out for the best. I know there is still a lot unsettled with what might happen as a result of actions from Colin and his mother. I look forward to what is next.
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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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This was another interesting chapter. Tania is healing fast and every day that goes by Grant seems to be more enamored with her. She is enjoying being kept safe so far away from her problems. Monica losing her job will no doubt force her to become self employed, which will work out for the best. I know there is still a lot unsettled with what might happen as a result of actions from Colin and his mother. I look forward to what is next.
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Beth, for another lovely review. I'm very grateful for your continued support. I'm it's all coming to a head soon, so stay tuned! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx