Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like your poem. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021

Hello Raul. Thanks so much.... what an encouraging review!!! :)

Melissa

Comment from 4theloveoftrees

Excellent

This is a very beautiful poem for the 15-syllable contest. It can be so difficult to get a good message across with those constraints! Thanks for sharing, I wish you much luck in the contest!

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 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021

Hello Pat... thanks so much. I really appreciate it!!

Melissa

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

A truism if ever I saw one. No margin for error here and two syllables less than a haiku's maximum to play with. A challenge indeed, and you have risen to it well.

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 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021

Thank you Jim. Much appreciated!

Melissa