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Comment from joycetreasures
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Hello Amada,
How sweet, admirable and lovely this poem is as a tribute to JoanE. This title, Bon Voyage of this poem really represents your message so well. It's tenderly and beautifully written. I don't know JoanE, but she must be a very special person, and an awesome writer. I love your author notes and the special meeting of you and JoanE. Also, the artwork of the clouds are truly amazing. Thanks. Nicely written.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
    What a lovely review, a sentiment of a great heart! I would like to read your work...
reply by joycetreasures on 03-Feb-2021
    Thank you and you are welcome. Stay bless.
reply by joycetreasures on 03-Feb-2021
    You are welcome.
Comment from Patricia Cammish
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This is a worthy tribute to someone who, I can see, was a beloved mentor and friend. You poem uses soft, effective imagery and is complemented by a beautiful restful illustration.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
    Thank you, Patricia.
Comment from Reese Turner
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A fine tribute to a gifted writer. A heartfelt farewell to a friend. Saying good-bye to special people in our lives is tough, but the alternative of having no such people in our lives is much, much worse. Prayers for your peace.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
    Thank you for your comments, Reese.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem in tribute and memory of Joan E who passed away, she was a traveler always described her interesting journeys through Poetry to see a glimpse of her experience.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
    Thank you for your great comments, Sandra.
Comment from Susan X Smith
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It is nice to see a tribute to one of our late Fanstory members. The lines describe a lovely person, who opened doors in the minds of others with what she created.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
    Thank you for reading this work for JoanE.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You have fond memories of Joan here and how she will be missed and your tribute is sensitive, warm and kind. I knew her only briefly, I enjoyed your fine words here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
    Thank you so much, Dolly.
Comment from QC Poet
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There seemed to be a portion of the poem missing with the poem spaced and written so ow below the beautiful photo included. The sentiments I did read are feminine I'm assuming they relate to a beloved friend based on the accompanying notes. Sorry for your Loss and God be with you Both.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
    Thank you for your geat comments.
Comment from Gloria ....
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Amada this is a fantastic tribute to JoanE, a most accomplished woman in many fields including visual art and poetry.

She is a member of the FanStory family who be sorely missed. With her positive reviews, and superb writing.

I really enjoyed this and those clouds do look heavenly.

Thank you for sharing.

Gloria

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
    thank you, Gloria.
Comment from palmart
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What a sensation! You guide reader through the deep ocean of feelings and fate. Perfect use of words in descriptions and facts. I found very meaningful the empty space you left between picture and poem, letting the reader be part of the vacuum you underline in your writing. Thanks for sharing your feelings and open the door of your inner feelings!

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
    Thank you so much, dear friend.
reply by palmart on 10-Feb-2021
    You`re very welcome, dear Amada!!
    A pleasure to read your writing.

    Blessings!
Comment from Vanna1
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Too much space at the top. Sorry you had to lose a friend. I like how you wrote her words took you on a travel, and then you tied it into your ending. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
    Thank you for reading my poem,vanna1