October Sun
Remembering autumn76 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
AAAAAAAAAAhhhh nice to be thinking about Fall with the leaves full of color and the smell of campfire in the air. Blotting out the blindly blizzard outside my window.
Very nice poem to feel free of winter. Beautifully written.
Patty
PP
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
  |
AAAAAAAAAAhhhh nice to be thinking about Fall with the leaves full of color and the smell of campfire in the air. Blotting out the blindly blizzard outside my window.
Very nice poem to feel free of winter. Beautifully written.
Patty
PP
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
-
Thank you Patty for your encouraging review. Sorry about the blizzard outside. I'm from Northwest PA, so I remember blizzards very well. But....spring is coming.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from tfawcus
I loved this poem. It brought back such memories of those wonderful autumn sunsets. We don't get them here in South Australia! Your description is vivid and absolutely on point.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
|
I loved this poem. It brought back such memories of those wonderful autumn sunsets. We don't get them here in South Australia! Your description is vivid and absolutely on point.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
-
Thank you Tony for your encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Susan Larson
Your words paint not only a picture, but also a video. I could just see everything you described, even without looking at the beautiful picture you chose. I loved reading it.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
|
Your words paint not only a picture, but also a video. I could just see everything you described, even without looking at the beautiful picture you chose. I loved reading it.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
-
Thank you Susan for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from dragonpoet
Jan,
Your words gives heed to your artwork. They match well. The poem reminds of all the season changes and all have their own beauty.
Keep writing and stay healthy,
Joan
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
|
Jan,
Your words gives heed to your artwork. They match well. The poem reminds of all the season changes and all have their own beauty.
Keep writing and stay healthy,
Joan
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
-
Thank you Joan for your encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
-
You're most kindly welcome, Janet.
Have a great weekend.
Joan
Comment from JLR
Janet, solid, very solid! Your quatrains flow very nicely and your end rhymes are unforced and show good success in the overall poem. I fine reading experience, good success.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
|
Janet, solid, very solid! Your quatrains flow very nicely and your end rhymes are unforced and show good success in the overall poem. I fine reading experience, good success.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
-
Thank you JLR for your encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I don't have any start to give.
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the start , you word touch my heart and soul.
Maybe cause October is the month I was born.
I never read such a beautiful poem for October before
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
|
I don't have any start to give.
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the start , you word touch my heart and soul.
Maybe cause October is the month I was born.
I never read such a beautiful poem for October before
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
-
Take care
cookie
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and
presentation, Janet.
-Very good imagery and rhyme.
-You paint a vivid word picture
of an October day.
-I like the line about the snowy owl.
-A good concluding verse, too.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
|
-Very nice image and
presentation, Janet.
-Very good imagery and rhyme.
-You paint a vivid word picture
of an October day.
-I like the line about the snowy owl.
-A good concluding verse, too.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
-
Thank you Pam for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
-
You are very welcome, Janet.
Comment from Newkidintown34
I really enjoyed how descriptive this is. The reader can easily envision the moment. I think you have included nearly all the senses...touch, smell, sight, sound...only taste is missing and yet I can taste the fresh, cool air. You have captured both the essence of fall superbly while wetting our appetite for the glory of spring. Thanks so much for sharing this lovely poem. Warm regards...NK
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
|
I really enjoyed how descriptive this is. The reader can easily envision the moment. I think you have included nearly all the senses...touch, smell, sight, sound...only taste is missing and yet I can taste the fresh, cool air. You have captured both the essence of fall superbly while wetting our appetite for the glory of spring. Thanks so much for sharing this lovely poem. Warm regards...NK
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
-
Thank you NK for your encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Julie Sandy
Really enjoyed reading this poem.
Love the story in the poem it captures a single night in Autumn. The descriptive words really make it come alive to the senses.
Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
|
Really enjoyed reading this poem.
Love the story in the poem it captures a single night in Autumn. The descriptive words really make it come alive to the senses.
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
-
Thank you Julie for your encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
-
Your welcome
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the autumn season that always surprise us with something incredible like a beautiful colorful sky that is not the normal sky we are used to.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
|
A very well-written poem about the autumn season that always surprise us with something incredible like a beautiful colorful sky that is not the normal sky we are used to.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
-
Thank you Sandra for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet