Tactile Emotions
More powerful than reality's touch...34 total reviews
Comment from kmoss
This reads like a winner to me! Velvet whispers-amazing! This could work on many different levels, could be intimate or not, could be for someone who is alive or not. The picture is a good choice also. My fav four line so far! It's fantasticated!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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This reads like a winner to me! Velvet whispers-amazing! This could work on many different levels, could be intimate or not, could be for someone who is alive or not. The picture is a good choice also. My fav four line so far! It's fantasticated!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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What an awesome review, K, and perfection to a poet's ear: that it works on many levels - hooray!! ;) :) Thanx so very much, my lady, and have a wonderful day out there!! ;) Yvette
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You too! :)
Comment from lyenochka
Yvette!! You're back!!
Lovely and really ethereal poem you have here. It conjures dreams and memories. And you give these realities of the spirit a tactile feeling.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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Yvette!! You're back!!
Lovely and really ethereal poem you have here. It conjures dreams and memories. And you give these realities of the spirit a tactile feeling.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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I'm back amidst the chaos of life, my lady (lol!)... it may be touch and go over the next few weeks, but this is my 'escape' that I've been missing, so I'll definitely be lurking here and there! ;) :) Thanx so much for stopping by on this one, Helen -- have a wonderful day out West! ;) Yvette
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats on your prize Yvette! Cheers. LIZ
Gorgeous! Stunning imagery enhanced by brilliant use of title/desc to pad the poem with two lines--so many poets fail to take advantage of the extra space.
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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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Congrats on your prize Yvette! Cheers. LIZ
Gorgeous! Stunning imagery enhanced by brilliant use of title/desc to pad the poem with two lines--so many poets fail to take advantage of the extra space.
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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Thanx so much for stopping by on this one, Liz, and especially for noting that 'tag line', my lady -- have a wonderful day! ;) Yvette
Comment from Raul1
This is what I suppose to think that dreams are like this of most of them pleasant. I like your poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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This is what I suppose to think that dreams are like this of most of them pleasant. I like your poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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Thanx so much for stopping by on this one, Raul -- have a wonderful day! ;) Yvette