Rain, Rain Go Away
A day from rain to clear skies75 total reviews
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Author, you have done one heck of a good job taking these various words and actually putting them in to a poem that makes sense. It seems to me this requires more work than write down some thing that you had invented. I wish I had more stories to give you.
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Dear Author, you have done one heck of a good job taking these various words and actually putting them in to a poem that makes sense. It seems to me this requires more work than write down some thing that you had invented. I wish I had more stories to give you.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from dragonpoet
You use the given words well in describing this woman's escape from the rain. There is nicely used consonance and alliteration.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
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You use the given words well in describing this woman's escape from the rain. There is nicely used consonance and alliteration.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Rain, Rain Go Away, uses all the necessary words and follows a free spirited soul through the rain until the skies clear and the vastness of the universe is revealed again.
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This poem, Rain, Rain Go Away, uses all the necessary words and follows a free spirited soul through the rain until the skies clear and the vastness of the universe is revealed again.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
Rain can be both a blessing and a terrible force of nature as well. But a little shower here and there, just so everything around us can freshen up, is among the best things in the world. The world becomes more peaceful and beautiful after a little rain.
Best wishes for the contest!
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Rain can be both a blessing and a terrible force of nature as well. But a little shower here and there, just so everything around us can freshen up, is among the best things in the world. The world becomes more peaceful and beautiful after a little rain.
Best wishes for the contest!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from Boogienights
Sounds like a wonderful end of the day, although for me I love the rain and it constitutes a good day in my opinion. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. :)
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Sounds like a wonderful end of the day, although for me I love the rain and it constitutes a good day in my opinion. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from WriterHeather
I really enjoyed your contest entry. I think "Use These Words" contests are the hardest and funniest contests to enter. I love what a vivid picture you have painted! Nice work!
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I really enjoyed your contest entry. I think "Use These Words" contests are the hardest and funniest contests to enter. I love what a vivid picture you have painted! Nice work!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from Patty Palmer
Ya did it! Sometimes it's hard enough to write a poem with your own choice of words but to write one according to another person's list of words sat out for you is a whole different story! Good job!
Patty
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Ya did it! Sometimes it's hard enough to write a poem with your own choice of words but to write one according to another person's list of words sat out for you is a whole different story! Good job!
Patty
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from rjuselius
This is a fine piece of poetry dear anonymous! However it is ever so slightly flat. It seems like you just use the words kind of throwing them into the poem.
Anyhoo, Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
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This is a fine piece of poetry dear anonymous! However it is ever so slightly flat. It seems like you just use the words kind of throwing them into the poem.
Anyhoo, Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
You did it, you used all six words with very few additional words, and it all makes sense. Well done! I like the feel of the poem - the mood it sets, of freedom and enjoyment of life.
Thank you for sharing
Susan
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You did it, you used all six words with very few additional words, and it all makes sense. Well done! I like the feel of the poem - the mood it sets, of freedom and enjoyment of life.
Thank you for sharing
Susan
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from Patricia Cammish
This looks like a pretty successful 'Use these words' poem.
Your chosen illustration is perfect. It rings a familiar note here in London recently!
As you have used verb past participles throughout, and it is neatly effective, I stumbled over the auxiliary present 'is' in the last line.
In my humble opinion I think it reads better without, (and heightens the onomatopoeia.
Good luck in the contest.
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This looks like a pretty successful 'Use these words' poem.
Your chosen illustration is perfect. It rings a familiar note here in London recently!
As you have used verb past participles throughout, and it is neatly effective, I stumbled over the auxiliary present 'is' in the last line.
In my humble opinion I think it reads better without, (and heightens the onomatopoeia.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021