As Time Went By
The continuation to the perfect years.35 total reviews
Comment from Sanku
I have not read the first part ,but I liked this part very much .transferable jobs can cause heart aches and a feeling of lack of continuity .Your interest in music is a metaphor for the changes in life...very well done
IOne doubt- please check the meaning of recondite..I think it is an adjective .
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I have not read the first part ,but I liked this part very much .transferable jobs can cause heart aches and a feeling of lack of continuity .Your interest in music is a metaphor for the changes in life...very well done
IOne doubt- please check the meaning of recondite..I think it is an adjective .
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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I truly appreciate your time and your comments. Have a blessed year.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a lovely record of your life and feelings during this part of your life. I like the easy going way you wrote, and the way you did not let troubles become a greater focus in your life.
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This is a lovely record of your life and feelings during this part of your life. I like the easy going way you wrote, and the way you did not let troubles become a greater focus in your life.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Thank you, dear Thaitie, writer who I admire.
Comment from royowen
I liked your post, following your hubby from location to location, having children born in different states, but with a different star sign for each, it must have been a tough life, I know a lot of wives like a permanent location, well done My friend, blessings Roy
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I liked your post, following your hubby from location to location, having children born in different states, but with a different star sign for each, it must have been a tough life, I know a lot of wives like a permanent location, well done My friend, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Roy.
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Well done
Comment from Iza Deleanu
No matter the difficulties you had in your life, you managed to find laughter and joy in the simple things and in the precious family life: "At the end of our transitory days, our meals consisted of easy TV dinners around a card table dressed up in a plastic tablecloth. Down-to-earth setting. The bright spot was six folding chairs, each one with its unique voice joining the chorus of our laughter, around a pile of meddling cardboard boxes .
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next part.
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No matter the difficulties you had in your life, you managed to find laughter and joy in the simple things and in the precious family life: "At the end of our transitory days, our meals consisted of easy TV dinners around a card table dressed up in a plastic tablecloth. Down-to-earth setting. The bright spot was six folding chairs, each one with its unique voice joining the chorus of our laughter, around a pile of meddling cardboard boxes .
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next part.
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Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Iza.
Comment from lyenochka
This is really beautifully done! I remember your first chapter and how the music of California Dreaming was playing and how that feeling of home was so important to you. So I can see even more now how much that constantly moving lifestyle could have been so difficult. You adapted and kept singing and that theme of music continues on through this stage of family life.
I really liked, " life was teaching me to grow in the zig-zag lines of a nomad marathon. " and "Morning melodies gradually gave way to nighttime lullabies."
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This is really beautifully done! I remember your first chapter and how the music of California Dreaming was playing and how that feeling of home was so important to you. So I can see even more now how much that constantly moving lifestyle could have been so difficult. You adapted and kept singing and that theme of music continues on through this stage of family life.
I really liked, " life was teaching me to grow in the zig-zag lines of a nomad marathon. " and "Morning melodies gradually gave way to nighttime lullabies."
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Hi Helen, wow, such a great review and stars. It makes my day, even my year!
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I love your poetic voice in your prose. I hope you'll keep telling your story! 💖