Sparkling Eyes
My Son53 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Damommy, what a fine tribute to a son who is obviously the apple of your eye. You have met the challenge Sparkle beautifully and could not have put your words to better use. This a lovely free verse for a lovely son who has a sparkle in his brown eyes.
He lives for others,
and nothing shows it more
than the sparkle
in his eyes........ Lovely Damommy - a challenge well met. Happy New Year to you and yours - regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
Hello Damommy, what a fine tribute to a son who is obviously the apple of your eye. You have met the challenge Sparkle beautifully and could not have put your words to better use. This a lovely free verse for a lovely son who has a sparkle in his brown eyes.
He lives for others,
and nothing shows it more
than the sparkle
in his eyes........ Lovely Damommy - a challenge well met. Happy New Year to you and yours - regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 02-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Thank you for a lovely review.
Comment from Pantygynt
What a family you are! You look after the abandoned and broken animals and birds and your son does the same for people. This is a lovely paean for a deserving subject. You get into the depths of the sparkle, not just the froth on the top of the champagne glass.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
What a family you are! You look after the abandoned and broken animals and birds and your son does the same for people. This is a lovely paean for a deserving subject. You get into the depths of the sparkle, not just the froth on the top of the champagne glass.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Thank you. What lovely things to say.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem about the sparkle you see in your son's eyes cannot be compared to any other thing that sparkle because it is more precious than any artificial sparkle.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
A very well-written free verse poem about the sparkle you see in your son's eyes cannot be compared to any other thing that sparkle because it is more precious than any artificial sparkle.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Thank you for saying so.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love this poem it's so amazing, an angel in disguise: "Seeing him play house with
a nine-year-old daughter is very endearing.
He lives for others,
and nothing shows it more
than the sparkle
in his eyes." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
I love this poem it's so amazing, an angel in disguise: "Seeing him play house with
a nine-year-old daughter is very endearing.
He lives for others,
and nothing shows it more
than the sparkle
in his eyes." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings
Comment Written 02-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Thank you for a wonderful review.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nicely done captures the spirit of your son in just a few words. tells the story of a remarkable young man who is a force for good in the world. well done
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
nicely done captures the spirit of your son in just a few words. tells the story of a remarkable young man who is a force for good in the world. well done
Comment Written 02-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful poem you have penned for the Free Versers club about sparkle. What a lovely poem about the sparkle in your sons eyes. He was a very special son and person I see as I read this, and very handsome too. Thank you for sharing this work about your precious son. love, blessings and Happy New Year! Teri
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
This is a very beautiful poem you have penned for the Free Versers club about sparkle. What a lovely poem about the sparkle in your sons eyes. He was a very special son and person I see as I read this, and very handsome too. Thank you for sharing this work about your precious son. love, blessings and Happy New Year! Teri
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much. He's a sweetie. But he's struggling with the loss of his brother as much as I am. He thought they'd always be together as they always had been.
Comment from Sally Law
How blessed you are to have such a wonderful son and person in your life. I can't nreally see his eyes, but I bet they sparkle. Sending you my best today as always and blessings for the new year,
Sal XOs....
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
How blessed you are to have such a wonderful son and person in your life. I can't nreally see his eyes, but I bet they sparkle. Sending you my best today as always and blessings for the new year,
Sal XOs....
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much. Happy New Year!
Comment from aryr
This was amazing Yvonne, absolutely amazing. It was a wonderful free verse. And a wonderful tribute to son's sparkling eyes. Of course I love anything that relates to caring and compassion. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
This was amazing Yvonne, absolutely amazing. It was a wonderful free verse. And a wonderful tribute to son's sparkling eyes. Of course I love anything that relates to caring and compassion. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Thank you. I appreciate that.
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You are so welcome Yvonne
Comment from l.raven
Hi Yvonne, it's and awesome free verse...
I have two paramedic's in my family...
your son my sweet friend...sounds like a very
humble loving man...very caring of others...
with eyes that say...not to worry...I am here...
I love your sweet girl...and love your picture...priceless...very well written...right from the heart...sorry I am out of sixes...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
Hi Yvonne, it's and awesome free verse...
I have two paramedic's in my family...
your son my sweet friend...sounds like a very
humble loving man...very caring of others...
with eyes that say...not to worry...I am here...
I love your sweet girl...and love your picture...priceless...very well written...right from the heart...sorry I am out of sixes...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Just hearing from you means more than any ole six. Love you, too.
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Thank You my sweet friend...you are so sweet...love xxoo
Comment from Susan Larson
The eyes are the mirror of the soul said some philosopher. I find in this time of having to wear masks, people are having to "smile with their eyes" it they can. It sounds like your son has already mastered this!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
The eyes are the mirror of the soul said some philosopher. I find in this time of having to wear masks, people are having to "smile with their eyes" it they can. It sounds like your son has already mastered this!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Thank you. He's always had a lovely smile.