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Book 2 of the Cleeborough Mill Trilogy

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Comment from BethShelby
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Through this conversation, we have learned more about Warburton's finial moments. I'm still wondering why the Lawyer had come and who he plans to see. I look forward to the next post.

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 Comment Written 30-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
    Many thanks for your review. All will be made clear shortly.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Well, this post just gives me more questions. I am sure Tom W had a death wish because he was broken hearted over Heather. I am at least guessing. I am not sure how the 'neck' enters in. I can't wait to find out.

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 Comment Written 30-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
    Many thanks for continuing your supportive reviews into this second chapter of the sequel. The 'neck' refers to an incident early in Book 1 after the Joliffes had moved to Jericho.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Exceptional
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It is a shame that Tom Warburton lost his life and in fact sacrificed his life to save others, he was a brave soldier and all his hopes of a future where dashes long before he joined the army. Your story is of course very well written and you are slowly drawing us into the new characters and their personalities, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
    Many thanks for this six-star review. It is much appreciated at this early stage in the sequel.
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 31-Dec-2020
    You are most welcome x x x