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Comment from nomi338
Way to go. This introduction into this part of the story was seamless. My anticipation of its arrival was intense. I appreciate how the news of Tom Warburton was a bit less painful knowing that it was not a shameful useless death. My take on Tom Bache was that he seemed a decent sort of fellow, not lazy and spoiled as Tom Joliffe was. I look forward to learning more about him in days to come.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Way to go. This introduction into this part of the story was seamless. My anticipation of its arrival was intense. I appreciate how the news of Tom Warburton was a bit less painful knowing that it was not a shameful useless death. My take on Tom Bache was that he seemed a decent sort of fellow, not lazy and spoiled as Tom Joliffe was. I look forward to learning more about him in days to come.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Many thanks for this review. Over the coming weeks we shall be treated to various different positions on the subject of Tom W. I think your reading of him was pretty sound.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Please go on. I need more what was Tom W version of what really happened. I have a feeling he knew more than he let on. I still think he belonged with Heather, but I guess she married Tom B. Way too many Toms.
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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Please go on. I need more what was Tom W version of what really happened. I have a feeling he knew more than he let on. I still think he belonged with Heather, but I guess she married Tom B. Way too many Toms.
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Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Don't worry. I will. There is plenty more to come. Many thanks for this review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Chapter of the Fiction speaks a formal taletelling about a dinner for two, good plot development, dialogues are realistic and this ends with a formal permission; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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This Chapter of the Fiction speaks a formal taletelling about a dinner for two, good plot development, dialogues are realistic and this ends with a formal permission; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Many thanks for reading and reviewing so supportively.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aw, that was My Tom, Allen is talking about. I can understand My Tom not worried about getting himself killed, but what a shame he didn't get to own his own farm. Now I can't wait to find out what Allen knows, and what he is there for. It must have something to do my My Tom. It's nice the way Allen and the rector have made friends. Now I want to know more. What did My Tom do? :) I hope you had a nice Christmas, Jim. :)) Sandra xx
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Aw, that was My Tom, Allen is talking about. I can understand My Tom not worried about getting himself killed, but what a shame he didn't get to own his own farm. Now I can't wait to find out what Allen knows, and what he is there for. It must have something to do my My Tom. It's nice the way Allen and the rector have made friends. Now I want to know more. What did My Tom do? :) I hope you had a nice Christmas, Jim. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Many thanks for this supportive six-star review. It is much appreciated.