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Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Peter Allen - A stranger Arrives"Book 2 of the Cleeborough Mill Trilogy
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Comment from Sanku
I enjoyed reading the beginning of Book 1.I have not read the previous one >but I am sure I will be able to catch up from from bits of dialogue. It sounds very promising .
I liked your smooth flowing style. And I liked the Vicar too. Peter would be happy to know about Tom Warburton
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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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I enjoyed reading the beginning of Book 1.I have not read the previous one >but I am sure I will be able to catch up from from bits of dialogue. It sounds very promising .
I liked your smooth flowing style. And I liked the Vicar too. Peter would be happy to know about Tom Warburton
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Comment Written 24-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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Thank you for reading and reviewing this.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Now who might this young guy be looking for? I could guess, but I will let the story unfold with interest. A fine introduction and I will kick this story off with a six as I have just one left! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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Now who might this young guy be looking for? I could guess, but I will let the story unfold with interest. A fine introduction and I will kick this story off with a six as I have just one left! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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Thanks so much for playing the centre forward and kicking this off to a flying start with a six-star review.