Betrayal
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Comment from damommy
I'm with Monica. She should hide out somewhere near this lunch place just in case. No telling what the snake would do to get his hands on Tania's plans.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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I'm with Monica. She should hide out somewhere near this lunch place just in case. No telling what the snake would do to get his hands on Tania's plans.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Hmm, you could be right, Yvonne, Colin is not a man to be trusted. The meeting takes place in the next part. Thank you so much, my dear friend, for reading this part and your lovely comments. Sending love and a hug! :)) Sandra xx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I know it will be a success. She has the upper hand because he has no Idea she is on to him. I am anxious to know how he will approach her about the plans. He must be delusional if he thinks she would help him. LOL Well done, Sandra.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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I know it will be a success. She has the upper hand because he has no Idea she is on to him. I am anxious to know how he will approach her about the plans. He must be delusional if he thinks she would help him. LOL Well done, Sandra.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much, Nancy. Yes, Colin doesn't know that Tania is on to him. This will be an interesting meeting. I'm so pleased you are still enjoying my story. Thanks, my friend. warm hugs. :)) Sandra xx
I had three messages from you with the same poem, and I'd already reviewed it when you first posted it. So I couldn't leave you one. I'll be watching out for another one. xxxx
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I can't seem to write new ones so I am cleaning up some old ones. I am amazed at some I did in the beginning before FS School. LOL Hugs, Dear.
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I've looked at some of my old ones. At least yours are excellent, mine need a complete make-over!!! :))
Comment from Ulla
Awe, Sandra, this was a great chapter and Tania and Monica had much planning all this now that Tania suddenly has a lunch date with Colin. I certainly hope she will be safe. He sounds like the creep he most surely is. I love the story. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Awe, Sandra, this was a great chapter and Tania and Monica had much planning all this now that Tania suddenly has a lunch date with Colin. I certainly hope she will be safe. He sounds like the creep he most surely is. I love the story. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thank you so very much, Ulla, for this fabulous review and all those shiny stars! Colin isn't a nice man, as we will be finding out. Thanks my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Mistydawn
I do hope she's careful. Being so desperate, he might do anything, especially if she pushes him too hard. I can think of a dozen ways this might go wrong. Maybe I should stop watching so much law and order, lol. Your chapter is well-written, very interesting, realistic start to finish. I look forward to reading more. Some of your sayings are different but colorful.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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I do hope she's careful. Being so desperate, he might do anything, especially if she pushes him too hard. I can think of a dozen ways this might go wrong. Maybe I should stop watching so much law and order, lol. Your chapter is well-written, very interesting, realistic start to finish. I look forward to reading more. Some of your sayings are different but colorful.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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I love Law and Order! Lol. Thank you so very much for this fabulous review and the six shiny stars, Misty. Your continued support is wonderful. I'm just glad you are enjoying my story. Sending you a humongous hug, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have feeling Monica is correct. This guy cannot be trusted and I am worried that Tania isn't going to be safe, but then Grant will be able to come to her rescue and Monica will know who the villain is. I like this story.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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I have feeling Monica is correct. This guy cannot be trusted and I am worried that Tania isn't going to be safe, but then Grant will be able to come to her rescue and Monica will know who the villain is. I like this story.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thank you so very much for the lovely six stars, Barbara. I'm delighted you are enjoying my story. You are as big a romantic as I am! Lol. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from blondie560
A platypus up a tree? I burst out laughing with that one! I'm hoping we'll find out more about Tania's relationship with the scumbag Colin. So many questions. Can't wait!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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A platypus up a tree? I burst out laughing with that one! I'm hoping we'll find out more about Tania's relationship with the scumbag Colin. So many questions. Can't wait!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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The next two chapters will show what Colin is like. :)) I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part, and the platypus, lol, I have no idea how I came up with that, but it worked well to lighten the scene. Thank you, Blondie, I really appreciate your lovely review. Warm hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from Ric Myworld
Whenever we think "what could go wrong." Something always does. But for some silly reason everyone always pushes danger aside and walks headlong into the fire. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Whenever we think "what could go wrong." Something always does. But for some silly reason everyone always pushes danger aside and walks headlong into the fire. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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You are so right, Ric. Will Tania learn that lesson? Hmm. Thank you so very much for those shiny stars, my wonderful friend. You always put the biggest smile on my face. So, I'm sending you the biggest, warmest hug! And lots of love. Have a wonderful week! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Pantygynt
Now you are taking a leaf out of my book. I was looking forward to the revelation of what would transpire at the meeting, and you left us hanging there. Actually I had a feeling you might be going to do that. Keep us guessing and, more to the point, keep us reading - as if we wouldn't!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Now you are taking a leaf out of my book. I was looking forward to the revelation of what would transpire at the meeting, and you left us hanging there. Actually I had a feeling you might be going to do that. Keep us guessing and, more to the point, keep us reading - as if we wouldn't!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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I hoped you'd notice. :)) Thank you so much for the lovely six stars, Jim, and the glowing review. Yes, I definitely want you coming back. After the next part, things will change for Tania. But, not in the way you would expect. :)) Warm hugs, dear friend. Sandra xxx
Comment from Bill Pinder
I enjoyed reading this well written chapter in your book about a woman who agrees to meet for lunch with someone that she obviously doesn't like or trust. What are "Get features?"
I like how the women are very supportive and cover for each other. Bill
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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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I enjoyed reading this well written chapter in your book about a woman who agrees to meet for lunch with someone that she obviously doesn't like or trust. What are "Get features?"
I like how the women are very supportive and cover for each other. Bill
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Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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LOL, 'Git features' is an English expression that describes a horrid person. I might have to add that to my authors notes. Thank you so much, Bill, for your lovely review, I'm delighted you enjoyed this part. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from BethShelby
This was a delightful chapter. I enjoyed all the girl talk and seeing how strong the friendship was between these two. The fall call was typical of a guy, trying to get what he wanted from an ex-girlfriend. I look forward to seeing how the meeting goes.
it would more than I deserve. (it would be.....)
Once I have him (a whole line space between the nest part of sentence)
discussing my plans
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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This was a delightful chapter. I enjoyed all the girl talk and seeing how strong the friendship was between these two. The fall call was typical of a guy, trying to get what he wanted from an ex-girlfriend. I look forward to seeing how the meeting goes.
it would more than I deserve. (it would be.....)
Once I have him (a whole line space between the nest part of sentence)
discussing my plans
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thank you so very much, Beth, for the lovely six stars and fabulous review. And a big thank you for pointing out those two nits. I've dashed back and sorted them! I'm so pleased you are enjoying my book, dear friend, so much more to come.Warm hugs, have a lovely week. :)) Sandra xxx