Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hi Melissa,
Willows conjure up wistful memories for me as well.
Note the alliteration of the "w" sound.
Please note:
The syllable count is off in the following line:

will carry our hearts away = 7 syllables.

Take Care,
diane

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020

Hi Diane. Thank you for the note about the 7 syllables. I will pop over there and edit!!

Melissa

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hello Melissa, lovely triple 3/6/9 beautifully written with perfect enjambment throughout. One little point - 'will carry our hearts away' has seven syllables, You've loads of time to correct. Lovely read and gorgeous picture- Good Luck - regards Dorothy xx

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 Comment Written 05-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020

THANK YOU Dorothy. I will hop over there and edit. Much appreciated, my friend.

Melissa

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Aaaah... daydreaming and cloud watching 'neath the big willow tree! Gentle sounds of the 'w' to carry the reader through your relaxing vision here, Melissa -- well done! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette

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 Comment Written 05-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020

Hello Yvette... thank you! Thought I would add a bit of alliteration. :)

Melissa