Slicker Than an Oil Stain
Not everything always goes to plan36 total reviews
Comment from Susan Larson
Delightful story that flowed very well and kept me wanting to read on. Delightful surprise ending and moral to your story. I liked it!Keep writing these!
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Delightful story that flowed very well and kept me wanting to read on. Delightful surprise ending and moral to your story. I liked it!Keep writing these!
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my story.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This story was really fun. It kept me on the edge of my seat until the end. By the time I got to the moral, I had a good laugh. The story is short but the writing is tight, with good descriptions. This is a very creative piece. I wish you the best in the contest.
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This story was really fun. It kept me on the edge of my seat until the end. By the time I got to the moral, I had a good laugh. The story is short but the writing is tight, with good descriptions. This is a very creative piece. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my story.
Comment from roof35
I love this one. This is an outstanding entry for the modern fable contest. I
think it will get my vote. I cannot see anyone topping. Your illustration is perfect.
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I love this one. This is an outstanding entry for the modern fable contest. I
think it will get my vote. I cannot see anyone topping. Your illustration is perfect.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for the six star review. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my story.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
A nice job on the fable and a twisted ending. Who woulda thunk a lady in an evening gown would be totin'?
haha
One note:
--> "Give me (y)our valuables or I'll carve you up into little pieces."
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Dear Mystery Writer,
A nice job on the fable and a twisted ending. Who woulda thunk a lady in an evening gown would be totin'?
haha
One note:
--> "Give me (y)our valuables or I'll carve you up into little pieces."
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Good catch Robyn. Thank you very much. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my story.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a wonderful entry for the fable contest. I love the moral at the end. The tension built up as the story went on so it was really a surprise that the dame he chose was not so dizzy after all.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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This is a wonderful entry for the fable contest. I love the moral at the end. The tension built up as the story went on so it was really a surprise that the dame he chose was not so dizzy after all.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my story.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery writer. Thank you for sharing your story, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Hello mystery writer. Thank you for sharing your story, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my story.