Amber and Rust Leaves
5/7/5 Autumn Haiku - contest entry24 total reviews
Comment from Bill Pinder
I enjoyed reading this excellent poem with the image of the autumn leaves crunching under the hooves of the deer and tying it to the whisper of the creek. Thanks for sharing your creativity. Bill
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I enjoyed reading this excellent poem with the image of the autumn leaves crunching under the hooves of the deer and tying it to the whisper of the creek. Thanks for sharing your creativity. Bill
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much, Bill. I appreciate your review.
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy---and cool picture, and thank you forb teaching me the meaning of a word I didn't know until now: susurrus: I learn something every day!
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Another fine poem, Gypsy---and cool picture, and thank you forb teaching me the meaning of a word I didn't know until now: susurrus: I learn something every day!
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Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from lyenochka
Loved the sounds of your poem! The consonance of "rust leaves" and "crunch...cloven" and finally "soft susurrus" and that last one is onomatopoeic, too! Hope you do well in the contest!
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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2020
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Loved the sounds of your poem! The consonance of "rust leaves" and "crunch...cloven" and finally "soft susurrus" and that last one is onomatopoeic, too! Hope you do well in the contest!
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Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. I appreciate it.
Comment from zanya
What an exquisitely crafted Haiku, in a creek setting - autumn's most striking colors - alongside a classic image of the season 'doe's cloven hooves'
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What an exquisitely crafted Haiku, in a creek setting - autumn's most striking colors - alongside a classic image of the season 'doe's cloven hooves'
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for the six stars. And Thank you very much for your outstanding review and kind words. I appreciate it.