Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 79 "For There is Only You"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Tina Crute
Wow... What an impression you made! Darkness isn't just darkness and the moon is not just a moon. The moon dances with the essence of night is my takeaway. This form of poetry is fascinating and so are your words that tell us things about darkness we did not know.
Tina
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Wow... What an impression you made! Darkness isn't just darkness and the moon is not just a moon. The moon dances with the essence of night is my takeaway. This form of poetry is fascinating and so are your words that tell us things about darkness we did not know.
Tina
Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Such lovely comments, Tina, you really understood where I was going! :) Thanx for stopping in on this shortie... I enjoy these for a 'breath of fresh air', ya know!! ;) :) Take care and may you have Wednesday of wonderment!! ;) Yvette
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I love your imagination! You are welcome!
Tina
Comment from trimple
Good evening, Yvette
Aside from this most spectacular photograph, your renga poem is truly beautifully written and I only wish That I could write as well.
You send a lovely thought in my mind this fine evening.
Thank you x
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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Good evening, Yvette
Aside from this most spectacular photograph, your renga poem is truly beautifully written and I only wish That I could write as well.
You send a lovely thought in my mind this fine evening.
Thank you x
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Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Such lovely comments, Tracey - I am honored. Thanx for stopping in on this shortie... I enjoy these for a 'breath of fresh air', ya know!! ;) :) Take care and may you have Wednesday of wonderment!! ;) Yvette
Comment from June Sargent
Beautiful addition to the book! Imagery of the moon dancing through the night is stunning. Perfect artwork as well. I loved it. Hope to see more contributions!
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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Beautiful addition to the book! Imagery of the moon dancing through the night is stunning. Perfect artwork as well. I loved it. Hope to see more contributions!
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Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Aaaah, I had to follow your pen so I tried to be 'on point' (wink, wink!) Thanx so much for the review, my lady, enjoy a refreshing morning up there!! ;) Yvette